.:SnoOk:. vs Joint-Boy
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 40

Check in by: 10-28-04 at 03:57 PM

Must drop verse in 500 minutes after check in.

Joint-Boy has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-28-04 03:27 PM.

.:SnoOk:. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-28-04 03:28 PM.

Tha Joint Boy has entered tha Room, Drop down to da floor was a couple of schrooms
You probably like lil kids shows, Droppion nursery rhymes and flows
Leavin you like a lil bitch you are, You da baddest Mc i battled by far

.:SnoOk:. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-28-04 03:33 PM.

OHb shit!!! i wasnt done.........FUCK yo how can i re do my verse?

Ok,This Cat's Rhyme's So Wack that's why he's Restricted*
My Verbal Imagery so Surreal My Point Come's Depicted
Every Time He Drop's His Verse....He Don't get No Applause
He Could'nt "Hold On"..Even if he had Titanium Claw's
Using a Portion Of My Skill Ta Force This Ho Obselete
No need Ta Post Ya verse-Just Press ctrl+alt+Delete
In My Book a "Snook" Is a Anal lovin Dick Ridin Faggot
I'll Eat This Cat Just like Aboriginie's Do-To Maggot's
Empty Ya Organ's & Stash Em' All Over Ya Own Home
Specializin In Bussin Cap's Produced From Steel & Chrome
Ill Clap Back On This Pussy While I Displace His Back
Disperse A Dope Track-Spew Acid Into His Pupil & Cataract
Prize His Brain Stem & Spinal Cord & Shove It Up his Ass-
Blah! Let's end On a High Note:Never Ever Pass On Grass-
Blah..I've got the Munchie's so Did'nt try Look's like my first Loss.....Oh Well G'Luck...

Fuck Sake you could of tried Faggot......Mayne....I'm Stoned & i made more sense Than You Fix Up Mayne......Uppin

Voted For: Joint-Boy

ONE SIDED.

First kid was whack. Whack as hell. Like 3 lines. Write somemore next time 1/10

Using a Portion Of My Skill Ta Force This Ho Obselete
No need Ta Post Ya verse-Just Press ctrl+alt+Delete
^^As far as I'm concerned, you won. I read to hear and You won. Thats it. All over folks..... 6/10

Returnt he favor (in ma sig)

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This was feedback posted for Joint-Boy
 

This is proper heavy. Joint-Boy rules this battle!! Shit i didnt no you was capable of that!!

Voted For: Joint-Boy

aight well this battle won joint-boy
don't gotta explain just look at da versez though
openin verse-joint.b
punchlines-joint.b
structure-joint.b
overall-joint.b

no hate on this vote just sayin da factss

Voted For: Joint-Boy

was this battle fo'real...?

Mal, ya verse was aight i guess...nothin that was real outstandin or anythin that i havent seen before...but at least you were consistent... and the structure was on point...

Snook....wtf were you doin...?!....i honestly dont know what the fuck happened here...the structure was fuckin horrendous...and the content of ya verse was far from decent...sorry dawg, but i thought you came real basic here....in your last line you said Mal was the 'baddest'...it seems like you prolly meant 'worst' but the way you said it made it look like it was meant in a good way..........

V/ Mal, for even puttin in some effort...no hate, jus honest feedback...

Voted For: Joint-Boy

Breakdown:
snook:
IP:


Tha Joint Boy has entered tha Room, Drop down to da floor was a couple of schrooms
^weak opener, no originality or punch.
You probably like lil kids shows, Droppion nursery rhymes and flows
^best line you had but still very very very weak.
Leavin you like a lil bitch you are, You da baddest Mc i battled by far
^crap closer, no personal or punch, barely a diss.
work on finding original concepts and try to find hard hitting punches.
Mal-Function:
Ok,This Cat's Rhyme's So Wack that's why he's Restricted*
My Verbal Imagery so Surreal My Point Come's Depicted
^first line unexplained so why put the * and second line self up. wasnt feeling it.
Every Time He Drop's His Verse....He Don't get No Applause
He Could'nt "Hold On"..Even if he had Titanium Claw's
^ok line, decent punch, and you cant get any applause either this is the net.
Using a Portion Of My Skill Ta Force This Ho Obselete
No need Ta Post Ya verse-Just Press ctrl+alt+Delete
^used concept but still good.
In My Book a "Snook" Is a Anal lovin Dick Ridin Faggot
I'll Eat This Cat Just like Aboriginie's Do-To Maggot's
^Decent line, nothing amazing or special.
Empty Ya Organ's & Stash Em' All Over Ya Own Home
Specializin In Bussin Cap's Produced From Steel & Chrome
^Bad line, barely a diss.
Ill Clap Back On This Pussy While I Displace His Back
Disperse A Dope Track-Spew Acid Into His Pupil & Cataract
^Good line, best you had, no wordplay but it works.
Prize His Brain Stem & Spinal Cord & Shove It Up his Ass-
Blah! Let's end On a High Note:Never Ever Pass On Grass-
^Bad closer, nothing special.
Nothing special from you either, you pretty much just talked about what you were gonna do to him.
V/Mal_function for having better concepts but both need elevation.
return the fav.

Voted For: Joint-Boy

vote malfunction-because he was actually in the line limit and came harder

snook that was only like 3 or 4 lines you should be dq'd

v/mal