Invisable Battle
 

aight this is a battle from another board(Not gonna say tha name). and i think it was hella dickrode so judge tha verses and vote for first guy or second guy.
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~First Guy~
Yo, my battles are like virgenity, the only way I loose is if I GET SCREWD/ you love me so much, you brag to Boogs tellin' him Nox DISSED YOU/ face it Demaze your resected BARELY/ and Im gonna give you a "Big L" like a Harlem CEMETARY/ cause battlin' Nox is like combing the Grim Reapers hair...a brush with DEATH/ the only thing hot commin' out your mouth is that fish smellin' BREATH/ you do text cause with all that cum on your hands it's hard to GRIP A MIC/ and your vocals are unwanted, just LIKE a DICK IN A DIKE/ LMAO!

---Ya'll want more disses?---

Yo, I dont even have to duck when you spit a punch, cause they dont HIT HARD/ and im so far above you, you cant see me, like we're battlin' in PITCH DARK/ Tank had to put "No Fags Allowed" on the board to try to keep you from JOINING/ your WEAK, the only only time you was packing HEAT is when you was fuckin' Alonzo MOURNING/ your BORING, putting PEEPZ to SLEEP like the eleven o'clock NEWS/ if hell was really froze over, I still couldnt LOOSE/ you try to talk shit like Tyson, claiming you'll eat my CHILDREN/ but you meant you wanted to swallow my semen, yo D thatz just SICKNEN/

--TIME FOR THA KNOCK OUT--

Im bout to have 12 w's like typin' four web adresses/
Demaze is like an alter boy cause he just got lyrically MOLESTED/
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~Second Guy~
Tha reason i asked you to post first is so you could show up, before i "Murdered~you"/
Judging by them wack as verses of yours, i'm suprised anyone heard~of~you//
I'll walk up in your crib wit tha infa~Red/
When i leave i garantee your body's Stiff~and~Dead//
I'ma Get~tha~Bread and then i'm out like ATARI/
you live in a "concrete jungle", Well i was "Born on a Safari"//
I'm Hard~G, step to this, i'll give ya MIC a C~SECTION/
in this battle you caught an "L" tha second that you CHECKED~IN//
Wait a second,what, you think your tight cause you be HOLDIN~THA~SLUTS/
Piss me off, i'll pull out tha TECH~AND blow a HOLE~IN~YA~GUTS//
You(U) Be(B) a faggot ass bitch, who thinks he's tight cause he TALKS~SHIT/
but when it comes to tha bottom line, Dick your just "UB"NOXIOUS//(Obnoxious=annoying)
I'ma "PLAY" wit "WORDS" like your name and tell you your NOT~SHIT(NOXIOUS)/
You claim your dodgin peoples bullets well dogg you just GOT~HIT//
if i wanted to define you, STUCK~UP~IS~RIGHT/
you gonna "FAIL" beating me, like when you "tried to FUCK~UP~THIS~SITE"//
I'ma "KICK" your ass, cause you bout to get "DEFEATED"/(Da-FEET)
be happy while you can cause i'm about to end your STREAK~KID//
Your mom was screamin at me sayin quit HURTIN~EM~PLEASE/
Tha reason i put BURNT at tha bottom of everyone of my verses is cause i'm BURNIN~EMCEE's//
Put your life at "STEAK" cause i'ma leave you "WELL~DONE"/
I just BURNT you so bad i might as well send you to HELL~SON//

BURNT :cool: OUT!!!

uppin for votes.:cool: OUT!!!

that second guy won this shit easily, just better flow/wordplay/meta's/punches/play on the name ( sounds like it with the UB-NoXIOUS shit...)
maybe if the other guy posted his verse up like the second guy it would flow better but i read the both of these and the second guy ripped this shit!

My vote...Guy number 2

2nd guy wz easier to get with ( understand ),although they both were tyt verses. 2nd guy had better metas.
"I'ma "PLAY" wit "WORDS" like your name and tell you your NOT~SHIT(NOXIOUS)/
You claim your dodgin peoples bullets well dogg you just GOT~HIT//"


vote=2nd guy

aight it's 2-0 for tha 2nd guy.and after someone wins i'll say who the other baord said won.:cool: OUT!!!

it's a pretty close battle the first verse had a nice flow but the second one had dope punches i'd say the second one get's my vote