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Chew187 10-28-04 09:50 PM

Must See
 
writing raps spreading silver like confetti
get ready bro i drop shit just like a jedi
i've gone berserk this jerk is screamin for medic alert
diss me once you know i'll make you hurt heck
diss me once more i'm bound to slit your neck
I have 12 shots in the clip & 2pac in the deck
I ain't in the mood for no questions
this is strictly business i'm into coke-measuring
keep em guessin
who the fuck can say that they're fresher than me
since my dope ass raps are pleasuring thee
solid as a rock
suck my cock your song is played out
& i have plenty of methods with a guaranteed pay out
at the ende of the day better watch what ya say
I've had a bad day & im barely fuckin sane
ok you've discovered my cover but i'm still above your shit
cuz i'm a lover not a fighter
you're just a crackfiend who can't afford a lighter
if you get a girl on your shoulder better bite her
your limp dick cant do shit like mine can do to her
I'll spread her pink so wide you'll swear it was lucifer
I predict you fuckng pussy no more
I will screw every single girl that you adore
i have pussy galore clawing at my door
chewing thru the hinges just so i can use them
too many proposals how can i refuse them
with so many at my disposals id rather abuse them,

Ms. Get Gully 10-29-04 02:45 AM

Not too bad..not really a subject that i could follow thru with on this.. rhyme scheme could be a lil better..but not a bad open mic. keep em comin

OrEo da cookie 10-29-04 03:35 AM

decent drop yo 6/10


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