Word-Scape vs Triple_N
 

Battle Rules:

14 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 10-29-04 at 02:34 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Word-Scape has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-29-04 02:14 AM.

Triple_N has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-29-04 02:30 AM.

Fuck this faggot man, just know im gunna be slaughtering you
Only reason hes comin half-ass, i cuz i happen NOT to be Tha Q!
This guy is utterly and complete garbage, who do he think he is?
Thanks to you Terror Squad now has 2 femcees in their clique!
This guy is a straght faggot, so please believe im rippin this kid
If you are what you eat........after this battle imma be a bitch!
Triple N you cant take, gather, or stand the punches I bring
Beat you in a fraction of a second, and give you the whole thing!
This is kinda sad though,how i put triple through all this anguish
Cuz his "train" of thought is a " 'loco'motive " and i aint speakin in spanglish!
Why is this guy a poor bastard? in his life he had bad choices
So when i took a walk in his shoes, I started hearing voices!
Hey triple,you better try to duck me again,maybe even run for cover
Cuz triple lost his life...................and i found it in a dumpster!

Jesus christ this verse had A LOT of wordplay so if you dont get it, DO NOT VOTE! :thumbup:

RV D/Rs got u disillusioned of winnin' when u shouldn't show up
Rap's not for u, lighten a match to ya ego only way u'd blow up
I know ya thirsty to verse me but we both know your wack
Ya spits are total ass even dave chapelle thinks your crack
I'm on a elevated plateau above your pathetic lyrical follies
U'd die trying to mount mines like climbin' everest on a trollie
Give up now..I'm cooking nothing and leaving u over-done
Cuz u couldn't spit ill with a mouthful of magic johnson's cum
It don't take while jus 1 line to see u lost, your jus in denial
Cuz u couldn't draw fans wit a magnet in the appliance aisle
You wanna be a tough guy online but like coltrain u jus jazzin'
You all net-thug ya gangsta is faker than ya gurl's orgasms
To date u only convincingly won 1 battle..I'll give ya pound
You are RV's king..no one can take your wackness crown..lmfao


Closer is about his wackness battle against empire...no I don't drop fo real but why should I?

oh shit u can't see his sig..well his sig has dave chapelle playing tyrone biggums the crackhead..so that waht line 2 is about

Voted For: Triple_N

triple took this handz down.........althought triples shit was real basic and i wasnt feelin it too much..you pulled htis off because of flow and structure...everything else was about equal.....wordscape had decent punches so did triple...multi's..like..none....flow Triple N..structure..triple N....meta's tie......this overall was a close match but triple got it becuz of those 2 categories

return da fav
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157342

Voted For: Triple_N

Word-Scape.... Yes i did get your wordplay but some of it seemed forced and i didnt really feel it.... your flow was good... your personals was okay but that one about tha q is really played and that shit is mad old... your punches was good but could still use some work...8.4/10

Triple N.... your verse was good... your pucnehs was good and your flow was on point... you had better structure then word and your personals was more to the point and harder hitting that is why i give this battle to you... both keep dropping... 8.7/10

This was feedback posted for Triple_N
 

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im sure he'll appreciate that interesting form of feedback

Voted For: Triple_N

this verse won due to better punches, flow, humour and vocab my fav line was this it had me laughing crazy You wanna be a tough guy online but like coltrain u jus jazzin'
You all net-thug ya gangsta is faker than ya gurl's orgasms The other verse wasn't as good and triple N took this because it was more enteratining to read..

why does it say 3-0 but there are only 2 votes? :huh:

Voted For: Triple_N

Triple N:
you got this not your best i guess.......you had some nice punche snot your best but better in this battle...a bit of vocab but not realy you lost in vocab but you had some pretty dope stucture lined good, word was off a lil...8.2/10

Word-Scape:
you flowed thats good, good punches but not better then triples punches are a main thing to a battle you need them so if you dotn know them yer fucked but you do dont worry tripl jsut has better ones i guess...you had good stucture but one line was streched but flowed but o well stucture was oof nuff said...7.8/10

VOTE: Triple

This was feedback posted for Triple_N
 

crew, can't vote. jus checkin' polls............................................. .....................

Voted For: Triple_N

aight this was a fairly tight battle... both of yall had a good verse and its gonna be a tough one to judge....

Tripple N- ya had good punches and personals, good wordplay, structure was aight, nothin special about the structuture... metas.... aight.... multis. nope.... overall a good verse but ive seen better from you... this was my favorite line...
I spent 15 minutes peepin' ya tracks & your alicia keys parody was booty
Now....I want my "quarterback" to "audible" his "plays" into silent movies

WORD- good verse, good punches, weak personals tho... better structure, and aight metas... wordplay and creativity was a lil off but ya did good, again ive seen better from you...
Favorite line:

This is kinda sad though,how i put triple through all this anguish
Cuz his "train" of thought is a " 'loco'motive " and i aint speakin in spanglish!


BREAKDOWN-

Punches-word
personals-Tripple N
Metas-Tie
Creativity-Tripple N
Flow-Tripple N
Structure-word
overall verse-Tripple N

VOTE-Tripple N

no hate word... just an honest vote.... good battle to both of yall but Tripple takes this one... kat just keeps rollin!...............