just felt like freestyling befor I go to work...
 

yea yea its ya boy I.E REPP'IN D2R YA HERD....

yo i cop O'Z the size of a commet hole...
ya flow is commical, punches known like a common cold...
hook un-phanominal, so "watch" my bullets... cuz "see its time to go"...
bet ya never knew ya chest could-fold...
dog, i be in a almond whipe intierrior same colors as my nuts... wow...
crack'in ya face same way i do my dutch...
rep D2R like P.R, till doctors come performing C.P.R ...
got the blind list'in saying.... i can see he's hard...
front'in on R.V while ya trying to figue out our faces...
the same way cops try to figuer out our cases...
the way i throw these whack emcees down on they knees...
im spittin so sick "atchu" when i "sneeze"...
the text i flee, elevation higher than trees...
while mah biological form of glucose subtractin sugar off these mis-placed G'z..
i tranfer info the way i send puters to come(com)...
punches leaving all ya'll bodies numb.. dun act dumb...
cuz add up lyrics until i "sum"...
and make you swallow a pack of mah spits ten times the size of "tums"
get outta tha game cuzz when i reign i make ya'll katz insane...
cuttin blood circulations from ya veins...
then go on the fast-lane... but remember i aint here for fun im straight i leave emcees in pain
next on tha charts to me is way lower than average formation...
i set implications... while i play stations...
im on tha top "ratin"... so stop hatin... cuzz ur opposite of mah acts...
it aint worth retaining so stop realatin....
ur outta order like "lost-line"... pull out nines and make da heat fracture your shrines....
re-order ya spine... fuck a clock... while i stick knifes in ya time... and punches squeeze da red outta u like "heinz"....
too slick with my order of spits... tallying them on ticks, while snatchin strawz from hicks...
with one click "BAMM" i blow out ya hips.....
and make so many "hits" on ya "lips" makin u talk over ya toungue like u had a fuckin "lisp"... *ha*
nigga under my pention while im extending ya katz offendin...
im redemless im enhacin so temendous..
get off da dick bitch... o ya i forgot to mention im beating you bitches like my "Shaw-Shank" extend-this...
my flow bustin all yo wit mah tops of a fouty-fo... smoke ya like dro, stop open the steal-toe... and i lyrically grow...
like a dick stickin up a bitch azz .... man SUCK MY DICK YO...

:shoot: BANG-BANG-EARLY :shoot:

I TOLD YA MOTHER FUCKERS IM BACK AT IT AGAIN......

D2R YA HERD.....

good flow,good punches,good vocab.good shit,keep em comin'.

good look'in upp'in.....

upp'in dont sleep.....................................

Decent, looked like you had to forse a couple of those lines out. You're style is similar to Em's but he has more versatility & some better lines & structure
But how can you compare youself to Eminem?!? :laugh: N-E wayz nice drop I wouldn't say it was much better than average but it looks like you typed it in a hurry so.. Keep dropping; there were a few lines I thought were great Even on the ones that werent so great still had good flow to it :shoot: 8/10 PROPS

thanks for the feedback ya......

upp'in for more feed back.......

thanks for the feedback ya......

upp'in for more feed back.......

thanks for the feedback ya......

upp'in for more feed back.......

upp'in for feed back..........

i like ya hit em up better but hot drop..we should collab so name a topic and holla..

upp'in............................................ .......

up up and away she blows

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