illuson vs J.R. Freeze
 

Battle Rules:

8-12 lines
No Crew Votes
No Biting
no d/r


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-29-04 at 03:34 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

illuson has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-29-04 03:06 PM.

J.R. Freeze has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-29-04 03:07 PM.

Who you STEPPIN TOO,DUDE? You bout to get WET~LIKE~A~POOL/
It’s like I “decapitated” him the way I’m “A-HEAD”~OF~THIS~FOOL/
What you bet that If I confronted you in the streets your bitch-ass would Keep~on~walkin?//
Call me Jon Gruden, cause I’ll BUST SHOTS that’ll DROP YO’ ASS quicker than Key~Shawn~Johnson//(ooooh!)
Like SMASHING a Register that got robbed, BITCH, I’ll beat~you~CENTS~less (senseless, haha)//
Cause this fag is FAKER than Bail Bond posing as TEN Peter~Quinces//
I got this lil’ bitch RATTLED~AS~FUCK thinking of ways to get~you~slain//
I’ll toss you through GLASS & SHATTER~YO~GUTS, to indroduce you to a WINDOW~PAYNE (pain)//(Think about that one, hahah)
I’ll have yo’ momma bawlin’ when that bitch gets the vision~ary of your obitu~ary//
Cause jR is ON TOP and FUCKING YOU UP, like when you do your mom mission~ary//
You could Rep the “EAST AND WEST”, and still NEVER~MAKE~“ENDS”~MEET!//
Bitch, I’ll put my “EAGLE” to the “BACK” of your “HEAD” like a TWENTY~FIVE~CENT~PIECE// (ooooohhhhh)

i gota passion but aint the christ
shit hit the fan like u was JA and im obie trice
if u was pamala lee i wouldnt look at u twice
ure like kenny from sout park u get killed every time
u wanna be milonaire some one get this man a life line!
j.r. freeze u wanna be an m.c. please
ill smak u so hard theyll be swearin u chinesse
ure rhymes are point less at all times
like getin locked up for mistamnour crimes
yea my record is ridcouls
at least i got balls to show u just dickless
im the cure for rap u just another m.c. with a sickness

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Voted For: J.R. Freeze

goddamn it this shit was like a 60-40 battle
kinda close even tho illusion verse was kinda wack he had some iight puchlinezs.
but goddamn jr freeze merked him wit da multis, personals, basically every thing.
most of illusions lyrics aint even rhyme. but j.r advice fix that strucyure cuz niggas is gonna get on u for that

Voted For: J.R. Freeze

illusion-before you do any more battles...elevate...a lot...thanks...everything of yours was basic....punches didnt hit...no personals or wordplay...liek i said...elevate

JR Freeze-dont use those //'s we'll know where your line ends....your structure was off...it threw off your flow a little bit...but lets see/...a lot of wordplay....no personals...decent punches and an average vocab...mediocre drop...but it gets you the win

V/JR Freeze
Reason:Better wordplay vocab and punches

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Voted For: illuson

Both were tite...nice wordplay...structure...multies...

illusion: betta overall verse...got his punches to the point...kept a good flow...good structure...

Freeze: good verse...took too much time with the punches...lines were just a lil' stretched...ur punches were aight...but they werent worth writing so many words...good structure though...

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