illuson vs Thousand Miles
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
etc rules....

good luck!

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-29-04 at 08:34 PM

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Old / Expired battle close - win

yo accept this kid................................

illuson has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-29-04 08:08 PM.

Thousand Miles has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-29-04 08:10 PM.

here is 10 lines:

fuck this bitch......i'll eat up this pussy like a apple
This kid is useful...I can use you as a bad example
fuck it...i'll abuse this bitch like he is fucking used
If you sold winning streaks...no one would ever lose
I'll beat this kid with ease...but it don't really matter
You pack less punch than a retard throwing feathers
this kid's fucked...on the arena there'd be no friendship
your punches less useful than a parachute on a spaceship

whooops, I only did 8 lines.......................sorry............

when im done with u ull be in the hospital
ure rhymes are old like a dinsour fossil
but ull be set when u get ure realse
hey since ure broke rent the space between ure teeth
u really must be trippin
if this bitch belives hes spittin
u say on the grind u covinced u can rhyme?U?
ill out rhyme u then out grind u

i only did 8 line 2

^^^^it's cool.

aight now, uppin for some votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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VOTE OR DIE

Voted For: illuson

aight my vote barely goes to illusion
here's why

thousand-fuck this bitch......i'll eat up this pussy like a apple
This kid is useful...I can use you as a bad example
^^eh alright opener..okay punch coulda hit harder
fuck it...i'll abuse this bitch like he is fucking used
If you sold winning streaks...no one would ever lose
^^weak punch didnt hit
I'll beat this kid with ease...but it don't really matter
You pack less punch than a retard throwing feathers
^^self glorify and it didnt realy rhyme to well weak punch
this kid's fucked...on the arena there'd be no friendship
your punches less useful than a parachute on a spaceship
^^kinda funny punch okay closer best punch of all
over all 4/10 you came weak with punches no personals and they only thing good was structure flow was okay

illusion-when im done with u ull be in the hospital
ure rhymes are old like a dinsour fossil
^^weak opener punch missed
but ull be set when u get ure realse
hey since ure broke rent the space between ure teeth
^^haha funny punch woulda been easier to understand if ya added a comma and didnt have ure as ur
u really must be trippin
if this bitch belives hes spittin
^^okay punch not too good coulda been harder
u say on the grind u covinced u can rhyme?U?
ill out rhyme u then out grind u
^^eh weak closer rhymed u with you coulda been better
overall 5/10

punches=ill
flow=tho
structure=tho
vocab=ill
worplay=ill
personals=neither

v/illusion

peace~1

Voted For: Thousand Miles

Thousand got this.

illusion: first of all ya structure wasn't too great. punches were weak. U had some metas, weak, but still u had some. Try and work on ya structure and add some more wittier lines with wordplay and improved metas. elevate.

Thousand Miles: Nice verse. structure was neatly structured. had some nice metas. I liked the meta in ya first bar. punches were alright. i think u got this battle with better structure and punches.

vote: Thousand Miles

This was feedback posted for illuson
 

hahahahahaha!!! you have elevated, finally. checking polls, illusion, you had one funny punch and that was it, thousand miles, DOPE FLOW

Voted For: Thousand Miles

Damn plain wack battle....but let's see
Thousand Miles i gotta say took this one though
it was a close battle...

Openin verse-Thousand Miles
Punchlines-not much but T.M
Structure- Tied
Personals- T.M.
OverAll-T.M.

try 2 return da vote if u can T.M.
no hate or notin on this vote

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