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hell's unfoldin' for my foes.
i don' need assistance "b", i rank high in selfsufficiency
climb in dis game sadistic'lly,slueth ya trickery leave emcees mythic'lly,mysteries lookin' to other rappers for indemnity i expose their infinite,infamy;infamous,inequity they're indentations on my belt,facin defeat inevitably constant intrusive,incursions excessively,excrably my euphonious flow,edentates egotists leave em feeble n flacid leakin'deoxyribonucleic acid to dese fake ass rappers im disastrous no need to spit da verse when i can kill wit da ad-libs leave em' in desolate dankness,shackled from da wrist to the ankletts. |
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Taht was aiight man!! Keep em coming & keep shit simple so everyone can understand it mainly you. You don't have nobody to impress just keep that in mind. If you sounds good to you release it, Everybody likes originality so keep it real. Overall that was a nice drop!! :shoot: 8/10 You can do better than that bro keep practicing!!!!
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i understand it well.if i didn't then i wouldn't drop or wrote it.when i kept it simple it was a problem.so i stepped my game up a little sumn.don' care to impress a soul just elevating.thanx for da feed tho' Chew.stay up.chk my other joint too.uppn this shit......
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uppn for feeds...................
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good shit overall....ive seen better from u Love damn wats up? lol but yea 9/10.....come on boi i know u can do better than dat
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feedbak pleez...
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it was good...might wanna use some smaller words for some poeple , 8/10
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thx for da feedbak.appreciate it.
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