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J Summers 10-30-04 06:22 PM

New Saaran Joint...BACK TO DA FUTURE
 
yo dis da ish saaran and pp2
BACK TO DA FUTURE
first verse: pp2
chorus saaran
second verse saaran
chorus saaran
third vese pp2

peep and leave feed

www.soundclick.com/saaran

K.ontroverz.Y 10-30-04 10:07 PM

muda fucka you took my beat i just did a verse for this beat LOL anywayz

ur flow wasnt that good

ur lyricz was hard to hear becuz of ur voice

but ur quality was pretty dope...this shit was aiight...just neet to pure more emotional on dis

Meziaa. 10-31-04 12:03 PM

Yea, just about all you have is good quality..
Multi's sound like they have potential but I can't make out what ya saying..
Your delivery and presence isn't good at all...I think that's the area you need to work on...
And you have no emotion...
Basically, work on it, because hard work equals success.
Keep doing you !.

iamthatdude87 10-31-04 05:03 PM

i wasnt feeling it......it seemed like u were just reading ur verse to ur self.....no emotion.......nice quality......and the hook u should of played with it more......lyrics was cool.....stay up

==>ECKO<==

J Summers 10-31-04 05:05 PM

i was the middle guy i dont see you sayin you cant here my lyrics ... i dont know thought but thanx for da criticism... yo ECKO audio battle me

iamthatdude87 10-31-04 05:10 PM

set it up bruh.....

JRoy 11-18-04 10:28 PM

The Chorus was ok but the verses were a lil off.....quatlity was Iight too...well keep it up i need to hear more pzz ~1~

-RKS- 11-21-04 03:30 AM

track was aight man your flow and delivery were aight emotion could have been upped a bit beat is nice lyrics were str8 quality was clean over-all pretty decent track man keep doing ya ish -1NE-

M&rk 12-02-04 11:37 PM

uppin cuz this my only song and would like more critism. im first, saraan secound and he's the chorus then i finish it up.


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