Ike vs Heroic Verse
 

Battle Rules:

3-7 Bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-31-04 at 05:40 AM

Must drop verse in 720 minutes after check in.

Heroic Verse has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-30-04 06:41 PM.

Ike has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-30-04 06:54 PM.

first off, you aint fit enough to fit in my shoes
you fittin ta lose, is what your ho ass is fittin ta do

voters be HEROIC, its me they pick when they choose
cuz VERSE wont hesitate to stick his dick in a dude

when i conclude this shit, ill have to send you reparations
youll be known as a loser when i mend your reputation

"we'll be missin you" like diddy cuz you out the run for a vote
fuck merkin this kid, im about to cum in his throat

im spit some gangsta shit, you with all those sappy love raps
i was rippin since you was swimmin in your pappys nut sack

i had a nine but the kid was screamin "save me, stop it"
so i hit him with the musket like im davey crockett

Kids beats On Women Look At His Name Its Ike*
It's Amazing YOUR Girl Didnt Turn Into A Dike
It's Sad His Life Is Only Hip Hop And BasketBall**
But Ill Cross Him Up And Let His Pride Be His DownFall
Put His Head To Tha Floor Like Dribbling Tha Ball
Fake Mc This Dudes A Fraud Lightning Rods
Will Strike Ya Hart Like Im Tha Lightning God
I Got Murder For Murking You Like Snoop Dawg
As I Slammed You On Tha Floor Like You Was a Pog***
Kids Finished Went Down Tha Stream Like A Log****


Explanation:
*Ike And Tina Turner Yall Know It
**In His Profile Its Says Hip Hop Head,BasketBall Then It Says =My Life
***Pogs Paper Like Material Used For A Game And You Slam It On Tha Ground To Win
****Logs Flow Down Stream,Kid Aint Elivating

Voted For: Heroic Verse

damn...thats good, verse structure and good lines

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This was feedback posted for Heroic Verse
 

just viewing the polls.............................