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SPuL vs L.I.
Battle Rules:
8 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 800 Check in by: 10-30-04 at 11:35 PM Must drop verse in 35 minutes after check in. |
L.I. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-30-04 11:09 PM.
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SPuL has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-30-04 11:17 PM.
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IF YOU DON"T GET THE PUNCHES DO NOT VOTE!!! GOD DAYYYYYYYUUMM!!! IF YOU HAVEN'T READ MACBETH OR KNO THE PLOT DONT VOTE EITHER!!!! GO LOOK IT UP OR READ THE FIRST 2 ACTS QUICKLY!!! WEEEEEERDDD!!!! VERSE BELOW
Like yo hold on Feebles dick... I thought me and you was tight? I guess I'm wrong, "MacBeth." Had to kill the "King", right? We already battled 3 times, I really won 3-in-row 3-in-row!?!? DAMN, you lose, tic-tac-toe!!! You're uglier than "Pete Rose", you losin' this, I will "bet" Newbie "critters" on yo dick, no wonder you're called a "vet" Jus like my 3 initials, to you... that's what we do S.P.L................. forget about "U"!!!! |
We'd go head to head wit fury.. instead we let the beef settle...
& I'd come as wack as I could.. but still wouldnt match ur level... Rep to the fullest son.. egos up there too, need tuh be saddled... & SPuL will get into the RV Awards.. only cuz i came dope in this battle...(battle of the month) Hideous mutha fucka.. look in the mirror, whats it mean?... Only shot at Glamour he had.. was in his mom's magazines... You have a chance?.. dont bug me, i dont wanna hear it... This kid has some heart and determination.. but I'll spirit... If you dont get anything...dont vote...or PM me for an explanation before voting...peace...g'luck SPuL |
uppin'.. g'luck hoe cup cake. nah layins? weerd...................................
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This was feedback posted for L.I.
Blah.....this one was tough to vote on. I wasn't really feeling SPuL's verse too much, but he kept it more personal and I liked his closer. L.I had more of a RB style, but it wasn't working in a few of his lines. His wit was much more apparent though. Hmmmm.......I guess I'll just leave this as feedback then :thumbup:
Vote on my battle bitches :thumbup: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157553 |
This was feedback posted for L.I.
checkin the polls...........
gud battle y'all pz |
This was feedback posted for L.I.
I got you for next.. ...for a battle... maybe.....
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damn, stop wit the feed and vote biatches!!!!!..........................
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Voted For: SPuL
L.I: first tiem ive voted on one of your battles meh i think yer stucture was good but bad flow weak...yer punches were pretty weak but they were still punches but they were jsut weak closer to the bottom of yer verse they got better... Spul: damn that was pretty good...good punches n all wordplay good...your stucture was pretty bad but you flowed damn good...you get this you had better punches n all around you were better accept for stucture thats it... return the favour here: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=157938 |
wow....all im gonna say.... .
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This was feedback posted for L.I.
l.i won this time in my oppinion
im still not gonna poll vote though :thumbup: |
LMAO! exclusive
herbest vote ive seen in efl in a long time |
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