Cautious vs ReQuiem
 

Battle Rules:

6 Line's
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/R

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-31-04 at 03:35 PM

Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in.

DQ'ed for going over 6 line limit

ReQuiem has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-31-04 03:05 PM.

Cautious has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-31-04 03:16 PM.

This Fag-Ass Kid Wanted To Call Me Out In Bitchslapped
Ima Hang Draw & Quarter This Bitch Leave His Body "Rapped"
I'll Rip Ya Rib's Open and Spew My Verb's all Over Ya Content's
Time To Repent As I Resume a Relentless Attack That u Can't Prevent
4 Line's and Ya already Feelin My Intensity & My Scorching Heat
kid Think's He's a Lyrical Butcher-Only Because He Beats His Meat
Done.Weak Verse.

if this nigga didnt know cautious just now land//the only pussy that he got on deck is his right hand// i aint got time for this nigga this bitch ass niggas on games//i make yo ass a franchise boy with white tees wit red stains//and stop usein peoples clothes cause all u doin is bumbin//ill bust a nut in yo face and u still wouldent see me cummin// so take notes from a nigga cause yo ass aint shit//u thiink u hard nigga but wait till u feel a holo tip//i know u cant swim so ill put yo body in a lake// and nowonder niggas think u sweet cause yo ass is a cake//ReQuiem talkes shit in his rapps so u know hes a lier ill make yo ass do like jay-z and make u retire//this niggas like micheal jackson he only fucks wit boys//while im upstairs wit his mama makin all dat noise//and i dont wont u to feel bad bout the rymes out my mouf//cause my bullets are like detergent bitch they make u wonna shout//andd if yo bitch ran up i just might have 2 shoot her//answer this question did u take a bath befor u hped on the computer//im tired of battlin people thats scare 2 die by the trigga// and listen to the way he cusses 2 can tell hes a wigga

U Fuckin Newby 6 Lines!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!dq Nigga Read The Rule's Before You Spit Your Wack Verse.

bitch u got 7 lines fuck the rules and fuck u 2 bitch mad ass nigga u soft talkin bout im weak who did u battle that yo ass beat.....yo dick

This was feedback posted for ReQuiem
 

Just postin feedback...i try not to vote on noobish battles...

ReQuiem...some rhymes seemed force...overplayed concepts...and no good punches, elevate

Cautious-dont use //'s...douche....your whole verse looked like a pile of shit...elevate

6 Lines with Rhymes u fuckin Cunt...Just quit Rap man please...

Voted For: Cautious

*yawn*

punches- cautious cuz u had em
personals- neither
metas- cautious u had em
multis- RQ u had em
structure- RQ cuz it wuz easier to read it
word play- neither
flow- RQ just flowed better
humor- cautious

cautious work on your structure cuz it wuz hard to read your verse. also watch it cuz he said 6 lines and u can get DQed for it. overall put in personals and wordplay.

RQ all u did wuz self glorify. try punches, personals, etc... u had multis, ok to see.

No hate just an honest voter. v/cautious

pz

Fuckin hell 6 LINES MAN HES DQ

Voted For: Cautious

DAMn nigga u got some godly ass punchlines, u won dis shit.
but u mite wanna fix up your structure cuz that was off
Punches-8/10
structure-6/10
wordplay-8/10

how bad u merked that nigga 10/10

Fuckin Hell can't u Dickriding Faggots see his verse was WACK and that he is DQ.Golden Shellz u just been Ripped.