cautious vs Phrensik
 

Battle Rules:

just freestyle as long as you want
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-05-04 at 04:35 PM

Must drop verse in 7200 minutes after check in.

Phrensik has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-31-04 04:35 PM.

holla my spit
Like a stealth assassin I’m massacre-ing the gathering masses/
These passages will ravage through ya mind like savage savages/
Wen sh!t kicks off, u try an spit ###### so I rip ya lips off/
And stick ‘em between ya hips; now u got your own pussy rip off/
My aim is to maim you so even you parents disclaim you/
An wont reclaim you, and wont refrain to hate and shame you/
I’m playin’ on these words like a pianist, u feelin this?/
I can’t resist the words coming outta ma mouth, U seeing this?!/

Betta brace yourself, I cut across your whole face to leave a dope scar/
Now the whole of your f*cked up image is mismatched like your clothes are/
U askin God that u beg to escape before u get taped by this playa/
But u made a mistake becuz the Devil just stayed awake and answered this prayer/
Im like parental advisory, 6 year olds shouldn’t listen to these dirt spits/
So I take ma tape to the nearest nursery just to make sure they heard it/
Im elavatin like a lift, spittin riffs, causin rifts it’s devastating/
Tha way im creatin ways that making mc’s stop hating and start rating/

I sneak up to yo front door, catch the latch, break inta yo cribs/
Plunge ma knife into yo chest and leave it sticking in between ur ribs/
Ur lyrics are like a 5 years olds, they just don’t provoke no more/
So I’ll choke u, throw razors at ur throat and cut ur vocal chords/
Then look into ur kidz’ eyes; he thinks im only serious ‘bout these~raps/
Laugh, take ma gat out, cock it an blast away at his knee~caps/

Cautious has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-31-04 05:34 PM.

Not from terror squad nigga but ill make yo ass lean// i hit niggas wit fuckin rifles and aint even on the rifle team//this nigga cant be serious talkin bout he wonna feel the lead// i astonish little kids cause i make white tees turn red// i got niggas thinkin about me like they think about pack// my automatic is like a sprewell motherfucka it wont stop//you wonna battle cautious bitch ass nigga u fake// nowonder niggas think u sweet cause yo ass is a cake// im not a king motherfucka but i took the thrown my enimies hear the name Cautious they say who..like mike jones//since i steped in the rapp game it seems like life has paused i treat niggas like annoyin bitches i dont answer there calls

that is so...............................................w ack

Voted For: Phrensik

Phrenz got this by a long shot by punch's multis and betta structure and all his flow was on point my vote goes to Phernz

Voted For: Phrensik

phrensik definietly won....his flow vocab wordplay and everything was better.....cautious's flow was wack...some of the lines didnt even rhyme...also alot of cautious's stuff seemed like it was forced into the rap

uppn.............................................. .........................

uppn vote this fuckin battle this dude is owned anyway

thanks east coast ill return tha fava......................

This was feedback posted for Phrensik
 

this should be a easy win.....
cant vote but im just upp'in this....

Voted For: Phrensik

no question whatsoever Phrensik took this battle easy his multis were unreal compared cautious man you didnt really even have one multi in there plus your wordplay wasnt happenin you had no flow and looked like you had trouble trying to find words that ryhmed. you stretched your lines way to much and it just didnt make alot of sense. but Phrensik on the other hand word play and flow were on point and like i said multis were unreal and the whole thing made sense. my vote for sure goes to Phrensik nice drop man.

Voted For: Phrensik

Phrensik

Took this one for sure, usually don't like long verses like this one. But you managed to keep me focussed during the entire drop so that's a plus! Had some ill punches and personals. Multis were fine. Vocab, flow and wordplay were like it should be. So overall nice drop!

Cautious

You used self-glorification a lot, should've hit him harder. Vocab was good, so was your flow but your punches, personals and worldplay need to get better. Compared to the other cat, your verse was short so i expected fire but i didn't even get a spark...No hating tho!

Return the favor...(honestly!)

Voted For: Phrensik

No doubt about this one... Phrensik came with the dope multis and packed harder punches. Some of that shit was hardcore nasty! I felt Cautious' guntalk and played lines were way to generic to do any harm, so that's why I voted for Phrensik. Not a bad verse but not quite good enough. Peace! Oh and return the favour y'all.