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9th Degree vs Verbal Abuse
Battle Rules:
10- Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 11-02-04 at 02:49 AM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
Verbal Abuse has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-31-04 08:00 PM.
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9th Degree:
its no mistake to me, ya pics look like chris farley's fake ID. id battle you in person, but im scared to set eyes on HIV. ya fat joe. youd stand 3 feet back to shake the hand of j-lo. id lean back on you, but truth is ya wouldnt last a month in a halo. see, i cripple foes n thats just to brake you. your a veteran rook. put it this way: if ya ever date, ya know its not because of ya looks. on this page alone, this threads the 3rd time our battles found. & notice this, you and me writing to each other...is like shallow hal. but look, im not the fat one. and im not the whiteboy rockin fubu. our difference is, you try and diss me. im just talkin to you. as you see, we have 3 battles on this page, its cause he didnt wait until i was online to open our battle, well ive keyed my verse and i gave him a day and a half to check, so let it begin. |
9th Degree has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-31-04 08:12 PM.
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In our last battle you dropped a fake line 'bout me havin' a pic
Then forged some nudes 'cuz you're self-conscious 'bout the size of ya tits Am I rhymin' too quick? This just a keystyle, fast verse Heard ya don't shave, this Hawaiian bitch brings new meaning to "grass skirts" 4-4? I'll change ya record from even to defecit You verbally abuse ya friends 'cuz they can't stand ya speech impediment I'm only doin' this 'cuz if I declined your ass would be bitchin' Can't stand this heat, but woman you better keep your ass in the kitchen I had to kill ya verbally, there's other methods I thought of But drowning would be ineffective...'cuz Cubans are used to being in water (she's Hawaiian and Cuban, that's all I need to explain) |
Voted For: Verbal Abuse
Verbal Abuse-structure n flow was on lock...good punches n personals(if they are true) vocab wasnt to complex, but your drop seemed to get the job done anyway...nice 9th Degree-structure was a little off..messed with your flow, but it was still decent..you coulda came harder with punches...closer was shitty...nice personal with the grass skirt..made me laugh, but it was too little too late...a nice drop but VA took this V/Verbal Abuse Reason:More consistent with harder punches, better structure and flow |
forgot to add.....plz return honest votes ..Me vs Khaos and Me vs RapGod
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This was feedback posted for 9th Degree
just lookin at whats up...................................
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thankz, uppin for more, ill get to that honest vote tomoro.
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uppin for more honest votes.
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse
okay verbal got this battle verbal-okay you had wonderful flow....it was a great read just rolled of my tongue as i read it.....very nice....you lacked vocab on this one but you made up with it in punches and personals...which won you this battle...your structure was also better than 9th degree.....ahah the punches were funny..i liked them a lot...very good multi's and meta's...good use of wordplay too...this was one of your better verses....keep it up 9th-okay you had good punches were humerous but verbal's were funnier to me....you had a horrrible structure..your personals lacked.....your one bar didnt rhyme good cuz defecit and impediment dont rhyme that well....you had better vocab than verbal......but you stretched your lines...you had good flow but verbal still topped you....i think you coulda came harder....if ya fixed up ya structure and worked on ya personals you woulda made the battle closer but verbal topped you....work on that stuff no hate just tellin it how i see it... return the favor honest explained vote..link in my sig.... peace~1 |
This was feedback posted for 9th Degree
Verbal Abuse: man you were just rhyming, i saw no persponals no punches, no scheme, no structure, just wordplay. horrible man. ya need to diss your opponent, ya want to ramble do topicals. cmon you basically gave him the win. its over.
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse
V.A. = your flow was cool....your punches were hard (some were played..=thats me tho) but some hit good...personals were aight....need wordplay but it was somewhat creative oif a verse..but overall you had a nice verse 9th...your verse was weak...flow was aight strucutre was bad, (to me..u had played punches)....and your vocab was real basic....elevate lil' more... Pz. |
Voted For: 9th Degree
WTF. . .dont tell me to vote on a battle like this ever again. Removed |
wtf. . .my bad. .......................................
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