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Muzical Mistress
My First Poem Eva
The Basic Beat Of Hearts Unseen And Corruptive Noise Of Ghosts Between Have Seeped Your Soul From Other Interests And The Pain Shall Kill For Another Mistress |
nice,short but said a lot, good for a first poem,would have been better if it was longer, but overall not bad..keep workin on it,,,,1
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^appreciate da feedback
tanks... yeah |
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