dirtboy69 vs. shellz
 

ten line limit
verses due tomorrow
first to five votes or three vote k.o
i'll have my verse tonight

i'm sick of people not showing up so you better like get to the showing anyway here's my verse

I take two nines into this battle and rid myself of shellz/
Not just the bullets but you too cause I’m in the mood for more kills/
Your shit’s complete garbage ya it belongs in land fills/
With you I create a blood spill with more blood still then an oil spill on the ocean/
Make you drink gasoline and eat a match and cause an explosion/
Even with the fire you couldn’t spit hot shit like the north pole your always frozen/
You can’t stop me like a transport truck with no brakes once it starts rollin/
You gotta be a trained thief cause every line of your verse is stolen/
Like poker players with bad hands against me your foldin/
After I tear into you your girl is the next person I’m going up in/

yo been chillin wit my homies all day but heres something real quick. yo yo
 

Dirtboy you must have cottonmouth cause nigga you can't spit,
so the next time you RAISE up shit is yo armpit//
my words are like vicks cause I surely clear and rock yo SNOTbox,
you must of been drinkin cause all you do is take drunk shots,
Ima punch tou and Ko you right from this laptop~ streight to yo DELL,
so go to tha beach next time.. cause thats tha only time you can get shelzz,
of course you can't stomic this nigga I pulled out yo fuckin Entrails,
then when Iam done wit them I'll just sent it to you by Fed EX Mail,
and I can tell yo shits just cheep ass lyrical words your shits just a bore,
my lyrics are sweet as PEACHES and your chep ass is just a fuckin HERB,

yo this is a drunk freestyle but uppin fo votes

amature battle..

::Run down::
Metaphors- you two were pretty much tied in this battle, but shellz pulld away slightly with the fact he had one at least every two lines..
Rhyme scheme-Dirtboy took it..Flowd better, an went with rhyme more than twice with one perticulare word
Punchs- Shellz came harder with his punchs..couldnt been ALOT better tho
Vocab- Dirtboy, but slightly.. couldnt been better on both

Now it might seem as tho you guys are tied, but if you know anything about battles the punchs take up about 40-50% of a good battle verse,

best lines in the both verses i thought..

vote=Shellz


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Ayo i got to agree with that dogg, Shellz came out way better than his opponent here, the whole verse was just better, it flowed ok and had better vocab.Good attempts from both doggs though, keep this shit up cuz you both seem prettty new to this rap-battling thing but if you both keep at it and elevate, you'll improve, good battle!!!

i could just say SHELZZ
but no dickridin' remember
anyway
he did have the better punch lines
but i fell as if Dirtys flow was
much smoother and the rhyme scheem
was much more constant

vote->Dirty little Boy

2-1 for shellz uppin this

come on let's finish these battles

dirt had easier flow to read. he also had some good punches, although some of them have been heard b4.

shellz had equal amount of punches,..but his lines were more creative.

"Dirtboy you must have cottonmouth cause nigga you can't spit,"


"Ima punch tou and Ko you right from this laptop~ streight to yo DELL,
so go to tha beach next time.. cause thats tha only time you can get shelzz,
of course you can't stomic this nigga I pulled out yo fuckin Entrails,
then when Iam done wit them I'll just sent it to you by Fed EX Mail,

the only thing I didnt like wz shellz ending. kind weak.

but SHELLZ GETS THIS VOTE.

imaginitive!!!

3-1 for him uppin this

To me, Shellz won this battle easy...he just came with the better verse over all, and he had more originality...

4-1 for shellz uppin for the come back

yo lets go uppin......

uppin this to finish

Shellz, just came harder overall in the battle, so my vote goes to him