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mag.nif.i.cent vs ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..
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30 lines max No Recycling No Biting Crew Votes Are Allowed since we in the same crew!! 3-0 is ko Topic: Life As A Drug Addict Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 11-04-04 at 08:22 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
..::iNgEnIuS mInD::.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-01-04 08:23 PM.
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Mag.Nif.I.Cent has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-01-04 08:38 PM.
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life as a drug addict
...... My life's been wretched, ever since i messed with, drugs its like i have no friends so acid sums up to more than hugs crack, heroin, whatever substance i could get my fist on getting sick, passing out in alleys, and getting pissed on no home, no wife, no kids, my life is equal to non-existant i stay persistant to find drugs to keep my mind twisted so listen, to my story, see the addictiction with no glory stay close with no hope with a bunch of drugs before me once a rich guy, my fist rised, all the power was mine you see unusually, i used to be a man who was confined but free until the drugs came into sight, and my mind strayed away no longer was i in the black and white i had swayed into gray the drugs came freely, and the money has always been there but a big risk to me was popping a couple pills if i dared suddenly the change happened and i needed something better standing on the corner for hours never minding the weather a couple years flew by admittingly i realized i was a joke weed wasnt doing anything for me i needed something i couldnt smoke i moved on to crack but the change was way too weird the adrenaline kept rushing and death was what i feared so i sat back with a fat pack and consumed all of it with a spoon and a lighter and the fumes crawling in no longer could these drugs really tempt my taste buds so i took more and more until i found some laced drugs i swallowed a couple pills then slowly smoked a little chronic thinking about the world not knowing it was my last day on it i slept that night in my dreams the last word i heard was overdose spent three weeks in a hospital unconscious and comatose so if you payed attention closely you would see that i was addicted but being dead at thirty one was something that i never predicted |
My life's too horrible, Cuz of you i lost the unrestorable... And because of you i work two jobs to buy the unfordable.. I only tried it once, but now just look at who im amongst... Bumbs with needs of blunts n even sleep in car trunks... Didn't graduate, cuz i wasted my time ruining my own health.. Now i have low wealth n barely makin it through life wit no help... I did know well, after one try, dat i'll stick wit this sad addiction.. I was warned n didn't listen, now wishin that blunt i was never givin... Always thinkin about it, after my mouths lit, i want to be around it... I really doubt it that i'll stop since i always see it where the crowd is.. It Seems impossible to stay away, cuz this crave won't evaporate.. I just wish that it could fade, cuz it hurts my life in too many ways.. I've already got caught once n don't want to sever time again... |
good verse I.Mind upping for votes people ........
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battles been open 10 days and still no votes... uppin will return favor
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This was feedback posted for Mag.Nif.I.Cent
yeah... i see where this "won" is going...lol... nice drop fam... i would have thought i.mind would come with a longer piece... not bad though... i'm out
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oops.cnt vote...nice veres though peeps.
i.mind had better struc, but mayb wasnt long enough... flow..holla at me if u wanna toical battle...wud like a rematch now ive elevated.. peace |
battles been open 20 days and no votes.. and tstorm ill battle you again but i was bullshitting with this verse i thought she would no show so dont take this as an indication of my topical skill getting worse but no doubt you was dope before and if you elevated it would be a close one...
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Voted For: Mag.Nif.I.Cent
okay this was a nice battle....both had great verses.....i really like flows structure.....iNgEnIuS mInD i liked your vocab...overall i think flow won because is seemed that he was on the story line alittle more then iNgEnIuS mInD but both had the shit verses...so my vote goes to flow.... . v/flow |
iight thanx uppin.........................................
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upping for voted drop a link ill RTF...
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Uppin For Votes Will Return The Favor If You Drop A Link
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This Battle's Been Open 27 Days Only One Vote Upping For Votes Drop A Link I'll RTF...
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