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Mulingha 07-03-02 09:50 AM

Paid For
 
Paid For

If yall only knew how bad it feels
You couldn't continue to show this
Pain and suffering emotions killed
Let out flames from a heart of anguish
See the fire run through my veins
Hear the torturing sounds
Lists of solutions where nothings gained
I can watch my life go down
Down that path of terror and fright
Not knowing what can have its way
Sensing a sprit so dark at night
Winning the battle of the heart that paid
The enviroment has settled down now
And I become a child of God
For I was lost and now Im found
Having relations growing fond...

By: Paul Jay Adams

J.T. KNUCKLES 07-03-02 09:56 AM

yo that was a good flow nice piece
what did you just get saved or something
yo Iam mixed up is it a religious piece or just a flow of emotions.1

Mulingha 07-03-02 10:02 AM

its kinda both... and naw ive been saved but i go into others thoughts and crap. thanks for postin

monkeypoet 07-05-02 10:27 PM

hey dude, ur back... ne way, nice peice, i liked this one alot... the flow was awesome, the vocab was good, and the emotions were raw and thouro... fave lines:

See the fire run through my veins
Hear the torturing sounds
Lists of solutions where nothings gained
I can watch my life go down

nice peice again... keep it flowin

synickle 07-05-02 10:41 PM

yo son ur shyt wass poppn. flow was weak. but keep postin. uno

varentao 07-06-02 08:48 AM

good piece...just solid all the way through....short yet so well put....respect....


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