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If yall only knew how bad it feels You couldn't continue to show this Pain and suffering emotions killed Let out flames from a heart of anguish See the fire run through my veins Hear the torturing sounds Lists of solutions where nothings gained I can watch my life go down Down that path of terror and fright Not knowing what can have its way Sensing a sprit so dark at night Winning the battle of the heart that paid The enviroment has settled down now And I become a child of God For I was lost and now Im found Having relations growing fond... By: Paul Jay Adams |
yo that was a good flow nice piece
what did you just get saved or something yo Iam mixed up is it a religious piece or just a flow of emotions.1 |
its kinda both... and naw ive been saved but i go into others thoughts and crap. thanks for postin
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hey dude, ur back... ne way, nice peice, i liked this one alot... the flow was awesome, the vocab was good, and the emotions were raw and thouro... fave lines:
See the fire run through my veins Hear the torturing sounds Lists of solutions where nothings gained I can watch my life go down nice peice again... keep it flowin |
yo son ur shyt wass poppn. flow was weak. but keep postin. uno
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good piece...just solid all the way through....short yet so well put....respect....
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