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Parallel 11-01-04 10:48 PM

ThugLife vs ...Xclusive...
 
Battle Rules:

6-10
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Accept in 3 days muthafucka...

Check in now or right away your herb ass is going down...heres the deal i win you take my pic outta yer sig...you win ill respect you and rep your sig in myne cuz im getting so much graditude with my pic in yer sig thanks you...Hoe!

Due: 3 days...Nov 3rd 12pm

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 11-06-04 at 07:28 PM

Must drop verse in 5200 minutes after check in.

System 11-02-04 05:18 PM

ThugLife has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-02-04 05:18 PM.

lil C.A.L.I 11-02-04 05:42 PM

bitch I take 3 min to load my gat/
and a couple more to make a track/
your like 10 u aint even got hair round yo nut sack/
just a faggot is wat u are/
when u came out tha closet u came out way to far/
runnin all over u for days/
only person u can have wins over are gays/
dog this shit will hurt if I swallow but what if I choked/
my neighbors callin the poilice on me cuz of tha faggot I smoked/1
man heres another win/
so thats another sin/
this is str8 from my brain/
im only half way insane/
u have an issue/
get a tissue/
and leave this site no one will miss u/




like xclusive!! get it

System 11-02-04 06:06 PM

...Xclusive... has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-02-04 06:06 PM.

Parallel 11-02-04 10:31 PM

Who do you “think” you are 2pac yelling out ThugLife…
I “guess” you think you’re gonna stab me with a knife…
Naw, you couldn’t hurt a “fat” man and his stick of sausage…
After…...I beat your “thin” ass you gonna need a bandage…
You wish you were dope enough to “drop” it like its hot…
Like the song by Snoop ft. Pharrell You’ll “fall” on the spot…

Macca 11-02-04 10:33 PM

This was feedback posted for ThugLife
 
wanna elevate use bigger lines and bigger words. punches got em but need to be stronger.

Justify 11-02-04 10:36 PM

Voted For: ...Xclusive...

V/Xclusive
Reason:TL overplayed gun and gay talk...had over 10 lines...shitty structure and flow...basic shit..no personals or wordplay or multis

Kawn Flixx 11-02-04 10:36 PM

Voted For: ...Xclusive...

wow this was har..*cough*

just playing lol

this was a easy ass damn battle like god damn..

Thug life..you had a terrible verse nigga
I mean god damn..it was good for an OUTSIDE
battle where its a real freestyle
but this is text..come much harder
structurewas bad and all that..especially rhyme
scheme..way too basic..

X. yours was coo too..I seen better
but you didn't have to try hard in this one..
what'd I tel you by hurtin ppl named
after rappers nigga? tisk tisk tisk

Parallel 11-02-04 10:40 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by .Indeph.
Voted For: ...Xclusive...

X. yours was coo too..I seen better
but you didn't have to try hard in this one..
what'd I tel you by hurtin ppl named
after rappers nigga? tisk tisk tisk [/font]


dayum you:)............................................. .........uppin

Parallel 11-03-04 08:50 AM

uppin............................................. .

anxiety 11-03-04 04:35 PM

This was feedback posted for ...Xclusive...
 
Because you both did awfull... I wont vote... Im just gonna say... You are both so whack... It is unbelievable...

Parallel 11-03-04 07:46 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by anxiety
Because you both did awfull... I wont vote... Im just gonna say... You are both so whack... It is unbelievable...


i didnt try............................................... ....................

Parallel 11-04-04 06:37 PM

uppin............................................. .

TeamOne 11-04-04 08:54 PM

Voted For: ThugLife

Who do you “think” you are 2pac yelling out ThugLife…
I “guess” you think you’re gonna stab me with a knife…
3 days for that shit????!!!!! 2/10
Naw, you couldn’t hurt a “fat” man and his stick of sausage…
After…...I beat your “thin” ass you gonna need a bandage…
................. dont even rhyme right..... damn fuckin shame 2/10
You wish you were dope enough to “drop” it like its hot…
Like the song by Snoop ft. Pharrell You’ll “fall” on the spot…
........... wtf???? weak closer 1/10


bitch I take 3 min to load my gat/
and a couple more to make a track/
..... ok shit....... but shit takes u awhile,,,,,, 3/10

your like 10 u aint even got hair round yo nut sack/
gets its own ratin......... 5/10, it was ok

ok....... well u already won the battle with that....... so there ya go........ ur structure was ok....... his was better, but then again u rhymed more of ur lines

K.ontroverz.Y 11-04-04 09:35 PM

Voted For: ...Xclusive...

ahhah u merked him..dont even know why i bother votin on this shyt

structure x
flow x
punches x
personals x
meta's x

everything x


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