I gotta keep backing my shit
 

[COLOR=DarkGreen][FONT=Arial Black][SIZE=4]Check this... Give feedback if you want and anyone who wants to take this on in a battle, say the word! Im looking for practice.

Stop resting the brood/
Slick, quick, naughty and crude/
WeeDex, regular ladies dude/
before i eat it, i always like to play wiv my food//
MCs for breakfast/ then Rappers for lunch/
to silence the violence il have the true dapper at brunch//
Then dinnertime/ the sun shines start a new rhyme/
slip into something more comfy and pour a glass of wine/
Have your sister and you mother for 5 minute ride/
Slip it inside, while i stretch the legs to their hind//
Scratches on my back, have her hanging from the ceiling/
Lap from her crack, in the sack im a demon!/
Now you know this hold this, scream if your feeling/
The reflex of WeeDex straight from UK-essex!!

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[COLOR=DarkRed][SIZE=4][FONT=Arial Black]See above, i hope i got someones attention!

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not too great man....im not hatin.....but were are the multis? the wordplay, the metaphors? you just need to elevate man......no hate....just stating the facts

OPEN MIC............post it in there..........then youll get more feedback