Lyriclesolja vs skillz
 

Battle Rules:

8 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-05-04 at 09:59 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

[b]DQ'ed - went under line limit/[b]

skillz has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-02-04 10:03 AM.

Lyriclesolja has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-02-04 07:10 PM.

Raw illusions make me draw conclusions engage in rage
u couldn't be a lyrical solja if u wrote raps with damien waynes in the movie major payne
Like a print press sent the best news as a night fighter
But on RV not a winner yet will bruise this typewriter
skillz will show u the deal but before that u gotta cut the cards
so when i sendem to ya you betta have a good hand to beat my barz

Yo homie claims to have "skillz" but he got merked by quidd Minx,
Hes out of his element like a priest passin a round of drinks,
Lost cause he choked he got so many excuses he cant blame it on a jinx,
He lost to Tito Bronsky five votes to one,
Claims to be good but he like a empty machine gun,
Talkin bout "I was born in that battle" if so then your his son,
Said "his turn awaits" then something i discoverd,
Judical didnt want to collab. wit him and neither do others,
Then he posted a collab. threaed and got no replys,
To me that shit doesnt surprise thank god yall were wise,
Cause no one wants to see his verse its like a stab to the eyes.

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Voted For: skillz

SKILLZ GOT THIS SHIT WITH THA FIRST 2 BARS DAWG U GOT SOME KILLA ASS METAPHORS FA REAL...ALL SKILLZ THA OTHA ONE WHAT EVA HIS NAME LOOK LIKE A ILLITERATE BASTARD SO HOLLA CHECK OUT THESE RTF
CHUCK LOW VS. DEATH
CHUCK LOW VS. DENIED TRUTH
CHUCK LOW VS. KKKHATER
OPEN MIC: THA CYCLE

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Ok my whole verse was a personal....learn sum fuckin newbie.........Uppin..

This was feedback posted for Lyriclesolja
 

checkin pollz..lookz like a weak battle..lol

Voted For: Lyriclesolja


Lyricle Solja
Alright Hommie Good Verse, Came Pretty Decent...Had Some Nice Punches In Here, In This Verse You Had Good Personals, But You Can Make It Better..Structure Was Decent Though Try And Make The Lines Line Up In All One Straight Line, Vocabulary Was Alright Kind Of Basic But It Was Decent....WordPlay, It Was Cool...But You Could Of Made It Better In Here

Skills
Alright Nice Verse You As Well As He Had Personals, Punches As Well Your Structure Was Fucked Up Though....That Needs To Be Elivated Alot....Vocabulary Was Basic I Mean For Real, But Multi's Was Here Pretty Good...In The Opener You Had Your Best Vocabulary, The Rest Was Weak....Not Much WordPlay In Your Verse, Just Coz You Put Those "" On Letters Does Not Make It WordPlay So Change That............
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.Over All This Battle Wasn't To Great But It Was Decent Enough, The Categories Was Good, On Personals And Meta's Also Multi's But If I Break It Down It Will Be Like This....

Personals-Tie
Punches-Tie
WordPlay-L.S.
Structure-L.S.
Vocabulary-L.S.

Vote=LyricleSolja