My Life Story- Dv (Unfinished Track)
 

My life story is more gangsta then yours son.. :hump:

boooooooooooo^^^ good shit DV. :thumbup:

Is this kid a joke?...suburben wanna be ghetto kid...hahaha

yo gud shit......stay up...

Word................

Holla atcha boi nizo

i was kinda confused lyrically... cause i was expeting a life story lol.. i heard alot of gunplay and ish.. flow was coo... i liked your last audio better tho.. beat was tight tho.. nice selection... not your strongest stuff.. you kinda jumped around alot lyrically na mean ? transitions werent there...



^im bein a lil harsh for elevation.. you know me tho.. i liek most ya shit.. stay up, and holla at a nigga net time u see me on AIM.. i think i got a beat

Word actually u rite..lol i just wrote...and i didnt focus...on the story really but is ok..

and am on aim slut..lol get on

This is dope so far, so much emotion,and in the beat as well,can't wait to hear the finished version, i'll keep an eye out.....1

-Listening

AHHHHHHH!!!!! This beat...lol...it's alright....delivery and flow is much better than most of your other songs...not bad at all....mic prescence is good....quality is still down there though..oh well....vocabulary and rhymes are good...emotion is good as well..not great shit I can't get into the topic myself..but you done good overall as for your verse...

Rating:
7/10

^^Get in it..hoe..lol

Get at me on aim

alright, i peeped up a couple of your tracks and i see you have potential. the one peice of advice i could offer you is that you need to learn to count your bars better homie. alot of it seems rushed to me and off key so you can't realy get your point across. i dunno if you freestyle on the regular or not, but (i've had this problem too) if you got rhythem when you come off the top, and go to paper and cant stay on que, just take whatever beat you're doin a track too and, instead of writing to it, just freestyle to it for a minute and write down what sounded dope to you and record it, blaow! it all stays on que.

hope this advice helps you out.

stop d/ring peeps


RV standards your pretty good

the otha sites im on YALL PRETTY WACK


this shyt was blah....wasnt really feelin it..........u didnt do it up right......

Was that 2 me?^^

and this aint even finished...lol....and Omen thnx fo tha advice ama keep that in mind