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schema 11-02-04 10:17 PM

Mike Hawk .vs. Schema
 

^Listen to Diddy...4 votes^

Rules.

Read & Good Luck

Check Ins Are Due Thursday By 12 Midnight Eastern
Verses Are Due Fridays By 12 Midnight Eastern
Voting Ends Sunday At 12 Midnight Eastern

schema 11-02-04 10:21 PM

check.......12?

http://community.rapverse.com/showp...20&postcount=24
http://community.rapverse.com/showp...36&postcount=17
http://community.rapverse.com/showp...737&postcount=6
http://community.rapverse.com/showp...741&postcount=8

Pop Lotty 11-02-04 10:39 PM

Yeh, wutever. . ..

Pop Lotty 11-05-04 06:35 PM

You gay.

This kid is shitty, taste in music is silly.
I mean seriously, who the fuck listens to diddy?
Answer the question, its fairly easy duke........
Nobody! Well that's why I can tell why you do.
On the real, quit rap, you'll never get a deal....
Homeless kids dig through your battle stats just to get a meal.
Garbage? Yes, how I'm gonna respect you now.
When last time we were scheduled, you no-showed clown.
Scared of the kid, your crew's full of faggots and they all shit.
A.I. like pirates?....I'm bout to put them through hardship.
You a faggot, That be on RapVerse all night.
I'll just report this mod, so I can end ya life.

schema 11-06-04 08:55 PM

late but I got an extension....
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i coulda ate your flower ass with my baby teeth
and i would feed.....
.................but i dont ever eat grade d beef
if i described you in two words all id say is "mike's soft"
plus your on my nuts so much.....
.............................that your name is my cock...
to say youre dope is a joke...to say youre not wack is stretchin...
you only win off bullshit fl votes...
...................................kinda like the election...
obviously the skill drop between me and you drops deep...
cause my crew dont want you...
............................but your crew'd sure want me...
id rather battle cream of the crop than the wack of the wack...
youre like darren sharper...
..........................you stand at the back of the pack...
how'd you get a rep from your ego? ive got ta find out...
yeah your cocky...
................but you got nothin to be cocky about...


vote....

Pop Lotty 11-06-04 08:59 PM

ahahahhahahahah

NewPort 11-06-04 10:39 PM

v/ Mike his was on time

mike-your verse wansnt really good man most of your lines didnt really rhyme and that would have been okay if your verse was stronger but the fact is that it wasnt it wasnt good at all

schema-yoru verse was better and that is all that matters... although you was late i let you have the extention:thumbup:

v/schema becuase he is better then me:thumbup:

NewPort 11-06-04 10:40 PM

schema wins becuase his verse was better

Stephen Elwood 11-07-04 02:44 AM

Uh..

mike got this very easily.. so shutup dickriders..

i used the beef line ages ago, and i just wasnt feeling much of his shit at all..

mike got personal, and took this i think pretty damn easily..

v/mika

schema 11-07-04 01:54 PM

1-1 uppin...if you dont get the wordplay ask before you vote...

K.ontroverz.Y 11-07-04 08:05 PM

schema took this

Mike hawk...wat da fuck waz that u didnt even try.....LOL diddy....OMG...dont eva use that foo in a punch

schema....i liked ya structure..and ur on dat witty shyt..dont mind...i gave this too u cuz beta wordplay and punches

vote:schema

Sik Wit It 11-07-04 08:05 PM

...nice battle but my vote = schema...

M.H. - yo verse was aight..but not that any good tho
like 2 lines..didn't rhyme (to me) that is..but prolly to u
it rhymed...could've came stronger tho...

schema - yo verse was good to...better than mike's tho
punches were hard...and nice w.p. too even tho yo shit
late due to ext. like what NewPort said...

v/ schema

eph 11-07-04 09:56 PM

Mike:

This kid is shitty, taste in music is silly.
I mean seriously, who the fuck listens to diddy?
good opener, but ppl do listen to diddy. not funny
Answer the question, its fairly easy duke........
Nobody! Well that's why I can tell why you do.
dont answer your own punch, player
On the real, quit rap, you'll never get a deal....
Homeless kids dig through your battle stats just to get a meal.
lmao, nice one. good wordplay
Garbage? Yes, how I'm gonna respect you now.
When last time we were scheduled, you no-showed clown.
stop answering ya punch, and never end a line with a pronoun.
Scared of the kid, your crew's full of faggots and they all shit.
A.I. like pirates?....I'm bout to put them through hardship.
it rhymed, but didnt flow.
You a faggot, That be on RapVerse all night.
I'll just report this mod, so I can end ya life.
i dont get it.

Schema:

i coulda ate your flower ass with my baby teeth
and i would feed.....
.................but i dont ever eat grade d beef
good.
if i described you in two words all id say is "mike's soft"
plus your on my nuts so much.....
.............................that your name is my cock...
god like
to say youre dope is a joke...to say youre not wack is stretchin...
you only win off bullshit fl votes...
...................................kinda like the election...
lol, great structure.
obviously the skill drop between me and you drops deep...
cause my crew dont want you...
............................but your crew'd sure want me...
got the punch, needed some wordplay.
id rather battle cream of the crop than the wack of the wack...
youre like darren sharper...
..........................you stand at the back of the pack...
lmao @ this line.
how'd you get a rep from your ego? ive got ta find out...
yeah your cocky...
................but you got nothin to be cocky about...
closure was a punch, but again no wordplay.

vote: schema

better structure, rhyme scheme, and vocab. harder punches, blah.

Pop Lotty 11-07-04 11:17 PM

^ WTF@ her dumbass.

schema 11-08-04 07:24 PM

closed. schema wins.


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