psylense vs loc
 

first to 3
no ko
10 line max
explained votes
etc.
etc.
etc.

Cool Im wit dat. U bust 1st and Ill reply asap......g'luck homie....

come at psy wit ya hardest? someone pass a kleenex this cats punches are like tissues no wonda you labelled REJECT,
ill slap you correct ya best expect me to cum hard like im erect,
I put fractures in locs lip causing him to spit with a lisp,
you want a punch line ill rip my hand off my wrist and throw my fist,
dont try to attack with that batch of crap you call a rap?,
you couldnt catch my words if i threw verbs right into ya mit without curves,
ill haunt you like superstitions with this rendition of a crash collision of fiber-optiks in ya vision,
you aint got the physical-permission to step to me and get left in critical-condition,
when cats like you spit all i hear is a hiss,
so swallow this dick kiss my fist and taste the piss



EDITED TO TAKE OUT THE ( " " ) 'S

RETALIATION
 

THAT WAS A NICE PRE-WRITTEN HOMIE....

~~L.O.C. ENTERS THE BATTLE FIELD AND LETS OUT A BATTLE CRY THEN GRABS THE MIC AND.....

Even if Psy wrote with a pen full of FECES his verse still wouldn't be tha SHIT,/
Cuz Im like a WILDFIRE in tha DROUGHT SEASON...Ain't no stoppin me once Im LIT,/
Im bringin heat ta this battle like ERIC & DYLAN back at COLUMBINE,/
& even if this fool sold TABASCO laced COCAINE he still couldn't SLANG a HOT LINE,/
so imma drop mine and draw a chalk line ta test the backbone of this hoe,/
And Psy U should change ur name to BLACK ROB since you like tossin them salads like WHOA!,/
OHHHH, ur cryin maybe I shouldn't be so hard on u SON,/
Cuz ur like an R-KELLY date...still YOUNG DUMB & FULL OF CUM,/
& like a PENDULUM ur back door SWINGS BOTH WAYZ psylence,/
So SHHHHH!!! go to sleep while I KO you with no violence!!

L.O. C-YA!!!!!!!


AND WE ARE NOW UPPIN. OPERATORS ARE STANDING BY...PLEASE PUT THIS POOR GUY OUT OF HIS MISERY...

psy
 

I noticed PSY edited his verse. I read it earlier when it said

"I put fractures in QUESTS lip causing him to spit with a lisp,
you want a punch line ill rip my hand off my wrist and throw my fist,"

psy did have a tyt verse though. but he changed "QUEST" to "locs". this didnt seem to be original for the moment.


but what did it for me is when LOCFUNK SAID

"Im bringin heat ta this battle like ERIC & DYLAN back at COLUMBINE,/
& even if this fool sold TABASCO laced COCAINE he still couldn't SLANG a HOT LINE,/"

that wz SICC

VOTE = LOCFUNK

GOOD LOOKIN OUT. I DIDN'T EVEN NOTICE THAT. WHICH PROVES MY POINT THAT THIS WAS A PRE-WRIT. I'LL LET IT STAND THOUGH AND SEE IF UR PRE WRIT CAN STAND UP.

1-0 MY WAY....STILL UPPIN

IM OUT 4 NOW, BUT ILL CHECK BACK IN A MINUTE, AND I WILL VOTE ON ANOTHA BATTLE WHEN I GET BACK SO DON'T DQ THIS BATTLE PLS. L.O. C-YA!!!

Re: psy
 

2-0 MY WAY AND WE R STILL UPITTY UP UP UPPIN

I don't know how to get the quotes but:



cause pyslence got caught bitting before..cant belive he showed his face again..oh well..vote loc..cause i dont trust pyslence..columbine line was pretty cool..nice shit



I vote L.O.C. also for same reasons, plus I also liked this line:



Even if Psy wrote with a pen full of FECES his verse still wouldn't be tha SHIT,/
Cuz Im like a WILDFIRE in tha DROUGHT SEASON...Ain't no stoppin me once Im LIT

ya i don't know if my vote still counts or not bu if it does it goes on loc better punches

Psylence's Verse

come at psy wit ya hardest? someone pass a kleenex this cats punches are like tissues no wonda you labelled REJECT,

{ this was an ight intro }

ill slap you correct ya best expect me to cum hard like im erect,
{nice lil bar simple but effective}

I put fractures in locs lip causing him to spit with a lisp,
{ lol hahaha nice personal here}

you want a punch line ill rip my hand off my wrist and throw my fist,
{this was an ight punch.. could of thought about it more}

ill haunt you like superstitions with this rendition of a crash collision of fiber-optiks in ya vision,
{nice fuckin rhyme scheme and vocab.. well thought out bar}

so swallow this dick kiss my fist and taste the piss
{didn't really like this finisher but hey nice verse}


L.O.C's verse

Even if Psy wrote with a pen full of FECES his verse still wouldn't be tha SHIT,/
Cuz Im like a WILDFIRE in tha DROUGHT SEASON...Ain't no stoppin me once Im LIT,/

{Nice lil Intro not very complex but defintly effective}

Im bringin heat ta this battle like ERIC & DYLAN back at COLUMBINE,/
& even if this fool sold TABASCO laced COCAINE he still couldn't SLANG a HOT LINE,/
{nice personal and effective punchline to connect it...good shit}

And Psy U should change ur name to BLACK ROB since you like tossin them salads like WHOA!,/
{this gave me a chuckle... decent personal}

Cuz ur like an R-KELLY date...still YOUNG DUMB & FULL OF CUM,/
{would of been a hot punch but i swear i heard some of that bar before}

like a PENDULUM ur back door SWINGS BOTH WAYZ psylence,/
So SHHHHH!!! go to sleep while I KO you with no violence!!
{nice personal i think... finisher wasn't all that bad it was decent}

both of ya'll were swingin
i was feeling both punches and personals
both of ya'll verses were tight
but theres only one victor
so my vote goes to LOC FUNK
his verse flowed smoothly and his punches and personals were more well thought out

Psy nice flow but i felt you could of come harder than that
cuz the creativity is there but otherwise nice battle verse

VOTE= L O C Funk

VICTORY!!
 

yo thats 5-0 my way. Thanks for the win playa. Next time come wit a keystyle dogg.