JPoll vs Eastcoast
 

Battle Rules:

10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-04-04 at 06:16 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

EastCoast has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-04-04 12:55 PM.

Egotistically you can't beat me, cuz I never miss aim/ Statistically the king of this game, and I'm here to reclaim/
The ballistical championship, leaving Jpoll with no votes/
And a sedistical slit throat, using a verse that he already wrote/
Your not rhythmical, you can't win, I'm on a higher level/
It's mystical, your six feet beneath, and i'm the one with the shovel/
Probably mythically aged, and yet you aint even hit puberty/
Ritually waiting till u get married cuz "I have to keep my purity"/
That's what J says, yet he keeps a spare bottle beside the bed/
Only a fag jacksoff with thoughts of a man inside his head/

my bad i accidentally messed up on typibng my first two lines....................

JPoll has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-04-04 01:19 PM.

fucking people...

Another hurb child, kids claiming to be a whole coast...
Too bad I'm like Rocky, punching his frozen raw roast...
And its true and it's on, even with a quick key,
You can't think you'll win...
......................cause not even your family believes
You'll get owned, if you go toe to toe with the champ...
I mean fuck as his desktop he's ink...
.....................ready to be hit with the NOBODY stamp...
You got cramps yet, cause your meager streak is done...
This kids as stupid as nelly claiming to be number one..
No I'm the king, I've had belts and I'll show you my ring..
You with my win is as unlikely,
...........as you and Marilyn Monroe having an all night fling

Voted For: JPoll

just stoping by viewing the polls.................

Removed

oo-fuck i aint mean to hit vote i ment feed-back oo-well it will get DQ ANYWAYS...

come on dawg im upping 4 votes......................dont b sleeping

uppin..........................4 .............................votez................ .

Voted For: EastCoast

EastCoast...Easy...Killed it...ill punches, flow was there, and I was feelin the scheme at the beginnin of each rhyme...nice work man keep it up...1

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Voted For: EastCoast

IP:


Egotistically you can't beat me, cuz I never miss aim/ Statistically the king of this game, and I'm here to reclaim/
The ballistical championship, leaving Jpoll with no votes/
And a sedistical slit throat, using a verse that he already wrote/
Your not rhythmical, you can't win, I'm on a higher level/
It's mystical, your six feet beneath, and i'm the one with the shovel/
Probably mythically aged, and yet you aint even hit puberty/
Ritually waiting till u get married cuz "I have to keep my purity"/
That's what J says, yet he keeps a spare bottle beside the bed/
Only a fag jacksoff with thoughts of a man inside his head/


pretty tight overall, i aint got time 2 break it down so...

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haha, stop asking people to vote, or i'll ban you.....................

Voted For: EastCoast

EASTCOAST I LIKED THE WAY THIS FLOWED, REAL TIGHT,PRETTY DEEP
STRAIGHT OVERALL GOOD VERSE,
JPOLL ALRIGHT VERSE NEEDED A LITTLE BETTER OF PUNCHES

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This was feedback posted for EastCoast
 

i dont think my vote was finished when i sent it by mistake.

vocab: i would have to say eastcoast's vocab is damn good, for a minor. Regardless of age tho, good use of words

Originality: JPoll was more original, i loved the marilyn monroe line

Sorry tho JPoll, i think you are good but was out-done this time