When Caskets Close....
 

**Yo,this piece touches on alotta things about me,..first off i wanna say Rest In Peace to all who i lost,and second off,this explains how i feel and where I've come from and the point where I'm at today! If you don't like it,..oh well,criticeze it through a reply,lemme know what you think. All who like it,reply and lemme know. Get at me!**
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DeVine
When caskets close my eyes open to face a world of one less/
Is this a tests..or is reality a bitch to face followed by death/
Is my breath short or is words hard to find to explain this mess/
Lost many friends and family who were innocent, so why am i still left/
Did god bless my image as a survivor in this game, i'm soon to find out/
My life took wrong paths, put me deep in ditches, but luckily i climbed out/
I rose from depths wit' street wisdom, lucky to still be livin'/
Through struggle,drug dealin'-n-death encounters, a 2nd chance to me was givin'/
God gave me the strength to have a normal way of livin'/
Put out inner fire as i asked god to extinguish all my sinnin'/
He let me fit in a normal 17 yr old image, still to this day beg for his forgiveness/
Tell him to cleanse my soul, erase all of my fuckin' opinions/
Help me to rise-n-face life in the eyes to defeat all the worlds dominions/

DeVine
~Mind Theoriez~
*Reppin' Till The Day I Die*
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~R.I.P~
Larry Graham (Grandfather, suicide) 1926-1959
Bobbie Price (Uncle, suicide) 1957-1986
Jeremy Price (Cousin, murdered) 1982-2001
Rachael Graham (Aunt, raped-n-murdered) 1963-2000
Andre Patterson (Friend, overdose) 1984-2001
Carmine Leuro (Friend, overdose) 1983-2001
Brett Thompson (Friend, suicide) 1981-1999
Jason Smith (Friend, overdose) 1985-2002
Tommy Delose (Friend, overdose) 1984-2002
Michelle Wagner (Friend, died from cancer) 1982-2001
Greg Mitchell (Friend, overdose) 1985-2002
**May God Bless Them And Watch Over Their Souls**

up'n,..don't sleep

get at me wit' criticism,..feedback,..anything,..don't sleep! Up'n

damn, that was deep, i love reading ish like this good keep up the good work, shit had ill flow, and easy to read, only downfall lack of wordplay, other than that u get a "B"

r i p to ya friends and fam
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nice flow dawg, it was pretty deep. I give you props, i liked what u decided to do your verse on. Like lyrical said the only bad thing was the lack or wordplay but overall i liked it man.
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Peaace

Yeah,i appreciate the replies and feedback. The wordplay did lack,but i just needed to get the shit off my chest ASAP,..ya know. I do a whole lot better wit' wordplay,but i was just spillin' some thoughts and feelin'. Preciate the replies and I'ma check out your battle dawg! Up'n dis shit!

DeVine
~Mind Theoriez~
*Reppin' Till The Day I Die*

Condolences man, I dont put criticism or critique to ish like this, it was a strong piece and you delivered your emotions well, there was an amazing depth and this was very heart felt, keep ya head up, keep spitting and elevating...

Peez...

Thanks dawg,...preciate your reply. Up'n dis shit,...get at me wit' feedback,criticism,anything,..just holla at me!