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Torch 11-05-04 01:12 AM

Torch - U Make Me Wanna (Freestyle Pt.1)
 
Torch - U Make Me Wanna (Freestyle Pt.1)



from day one the image of u crossed my mind
tought me how to love and just to toss the nine
side tracked but u never let me fall behind
ya beautiful like flower paper off wall design
been through some shit but we know theirs more to come
promise we'll beat the odds even if it's four to one
i'm not ready for a child but i won't let u abort my son
whoever steps near i'm torching em
never been a sucker for love i've always pimped em
but now i'm stuck to u like a cold flu symptom
body so hot u got me drooling over u like a downsydrome victim
i'm bouncing the system
its nothing new u know how i felt from the first day
never stopped loving u even when u missed my birthday
it's all gravy cause theirs to much to lose
but just cause i'm mad don't let it get u confused
cause hurt feelings may take some time
in others word this may turn into a waste of time
but lets stop that from becoming something real
i'm here cause i love u, not just for home cooked meals

Rebellious 11-05-04 11:23 AM

Ill work man. The flow was fluent except 4 certain parts,but it flowed tightly. Loved the rhyme scheme and multies. Fav meta was:ya beautiful like flower paper off wall design.Keep 'em coming!

JJFLOWSUM_5 11-05-04 03:56 PM

Yo Dat Was Tight I Like Dat Shit It Was Hott
It Was Rough In A Few Spots But I Was Tight

Loveliss Grandz 11-05-04 04:22 PM

yeah, that drop was tight..
it was only 2 minor edges but it didn't do any damage to ur drop.9/10
keep em comin'


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