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Torch - U Make Me Wanna (Freestyle Pt.1)
Torch - U Make Me Wanna (Freestyle Pt.1)
from day one the image of u crossed my mind tought me how to love and just to toss the nine side tracked but u never let me fall behind ya beautiful like flower paper off wall design been through some shit but we know theirs more to come promise we'll beat the odds even if it's four to one i'm not ready for a child but i won't let u abort my son whoever steps near i'm torching em never been a sucker for love i've always pimped em but now i'm stuck to u like a cold flu symptom body so hot u got me drooling over u like a downsydrome victim i'm bouncing the system its nothing new u know how i felt from the first day never stopped loving u even when u missed my birthday it's all gravy cause theirs to much to lose but just cause i'm mad don't let it get u confused cause hurt feelings may take some time in others word this may turn into a waste of time but lets stop that from becoming something real i'm here cause i love u, not just for home cooked meals |
Ill work man. The flow was fluent except 4 certain parts,but it flowed tightly. Loved the rhyme scheme and multies. Fav meta was:ya beautiful like flower paper off wall design.Keep 'em coming!
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Yo Dat Was Tight I Like Dat Shit It Was Hott
It Was Rough In A Few Spots But I Was Tight |
yeah, that drop was tight..
it was only 2 minor edges but it didn't do any damage to ur drop.9/10 keep em comin' |
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