rappin fast
 

dis one aint nuttin serious i was juss messin round

u should see me wit dese gurl how i conversate, :hump:
and when i battle these fools how i dominate,
and how im on da rate,when u gon to hate,
betta watch cause i screwed ya wife, :thefinger
and if i had another chance i do it twice,
me and my crew gon kill yo click,
gurls all on me cause my game so sick,
betta watch out aint no safety button,
still wanna mess round then ill show u sumthin, :shoot:
as u can see im rappin fast,
walkin past gurls and im grabbin ass,
im smokin stuff and sellin drugs,
hangin wit bad people includin thugs,
i dont no wrong from rite and rite from wrong,
but in da next couple days probably locked up and probably gon,


man dis rite hurr is some wack shit i juss typed
i was juss bored and puttin shit togetha really quick
but still give me some feed back

ey muthafuka's give me some feed bac

don't be so hard on ur self.
 

it wasn't bad for sumthin' u say u was bullshittin' around with.
oh and if u want us to think ur works good u gotta feel like its good.if u think it's whack urself then watchya think ur gonna get bak for feeds
"it was gr8"?
stay up and be confident about ur work,take pride in it,even if ur jus' shittin' around.ever herd the sayin' "one mans garbage is another mans treasure."
think about and drop some fire in here,aight.one :thumbup:

lol...aiight thanx for da advise..holla

The flow was there nicely,concept was average n the rhyme scheme still needs work though. Keep at it, I c improvement in every new post.

not bad not bad......nice and quick need more word play......keep it up

nice rhyming nigga check my shit home boi.

thanx for da feedbac yall..holla..

Yo you doing your thing an thats all that counts,,i give it a 7-10
nice drop hommie

yo thanx chek out my new verse and ill reutn da fav. it's call
these is my feelins