my life
 

some people say im a myrical lifted,
others say im juss lyricaly gifted,
cause i been on dis world for juss a few years,
had my happy moments and shead my few tears,
got a hold of my self,and switched up my gears,
now everybody listen and give me all ears,

every time i made a mistake i felt so retarted,
then i realized dats juss da way we all started,
always thought i had it bad,then realized sumbody got it worse,
got down on my knees and thanked god for livin on dis earth,
then sumbody told me,im an amazing lil boy wit amazin talent,
but he said in order to become strong i must face da challenge,
he told me i can become famous,and dont need a lot of wealth,
told me to ignore peoples thoughts and juss listen to my self,
told me listen to dis advice,and become wise,
he said dont listen to them,i have my own eyes,

ey y'all give me some feedback
dis sit is tight

that is A LOT better than your other posts...you already getting better....DAMN!

ey yall tell me wat yall think
i need some fuckin feedbac ill return da fav.!.!.!

this was aight...nuthin special tho dawg...but from what EastCoast tells me, youve elevated alot homie...props on that...I would've liked to see this a little longer...but its all good...stay up...1