g_moneytildeath vs young_one
 

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right now its me n g_moneytildeath for right now iight lets get it started..

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Check in by: 11-09-04 at 12:39 AM

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young_one has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-06-04 12:40 AM.

g_moneytildeath has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-06-04 12:40 AM.

so stop raping just write poems to ur a bitch that ur even try to get pussy that u didnt even hit//
u cant rap u should stick to boxin now the whole world knowes u as u use to sleep in boxes//
i dont need to my bottom of my shoe//
my bullents will do the stompin//
u odnt have to suck off ur own dick to blow ur brains//
just pretend when im bout to ice u n say my name//
if i kill u bitch nobody gone miss u make u fill in the blues wht rotc do//i gotta a gun to turn n shoot u hit when u hit the corners ull ass will just stay there n dont do notin so ull just be mine//
so all i have to do is keep ya ass in line//

my rhymes r highspeed like optimum online
theyll hit u so hard theyll make u ride the flatline

my rhymes is raw u cant even tell me
you will never be like me the great g_money

your name states it all u are realy a young one
with immature and wack shit u belong with the young guns

battling me son u must be brave
i spit so hard ill bring 2pac and biggie bak from their graves

Voted For: g_moneytildeath

punches-tie
pers-none
stuture-GMTD
best-tie
spellings-GMTD

gmtd got this 1 not much difference gntd cud actuly spell his stuff and he had aleast some stuture this was hard desicion but gmtd just takes this 1 very close n weak

Voted For: g_moneytildeath

VOTE G MONEY TIL DEATH

I laughed pretty hard on the punchline of optium online.
Young one usually puts better showin, you werent rhymin to good man...
Young one usually does better...G money got good flow n ryhmes..so he gets my vote

Voted For: young_one

my vote: young one u'r flow was good punches was ok more ups then downs but still a average verse while the other guy wasnt even decent just weak all around i wasnt feeling noting outta hes verse honestly

N thats why i picked young one

Voted For: young_one

My vote goes to young_one becasue I thought that his verse was more personal and it flowed better. G-money his was to short but young_one yours was strat to the point while g-money it took 4 lines for his punches to start. So my vote goes to Young_One.

uppin for more votes i guess whoes fanna win its tied 2-2 n yea uppin

Voted For: g_moneytildeath

both were actually kinda weak but i gotta give this one to g_money cuz youngs shit just didnt realli make any sense
work on ur structure a lil bit and you both need to work on your punches

Vote: g_money

more votes keep em comin damn i need atleast 2 more votes to be in the lead....

Voted For: g_moneytildeath

my vote's for g_moneytildeath

pretty short but g_moneytildeath was a hell of a lot better than yound one...i jus really thought young one's rhyme was weak

nuff said

Voted For: g_moneytildeath

this is quite possibly the wackest battle ever on the internet... here is my breakdown....

gmoney- flow was good, rhyme scheme was iffy, strucuture sucks, punches and personals were ok but could have been better... overall ya need to elevate homie... 2pac lines are kinda played and shit overall i give this verse a 3/10

young one- structure is HORRIBLE!!! fix that shit homie fo real, punches and personals didnt exist, ya shit didnt flow at all, didnt even rhyme half the time that i can tell... i think about all u rhymed was brain and name and mine and line... thats about it.... overall ya need to elevate BIG TIME, no hate tho but damn, elevate... overall 1/10... seems harsh but thats the way i see it

elevate...both of you... nuff said............

VOTE- Gmoney