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Fly - OMB's first serious open mic... peep it
-Fly- Trying my best, but my dodging was slow and my hitting was hurried only 2nd round, already had blood at the nose and my vision was blurry Took a few in the ribs n' the tummy.... then the end of round siren went ding Tired as shit, coach was yappin, but I was sittin here at the side of the ring tryin to think............ completely ignoring my coach talking next to me Ive decided I cant beat him physically, so Ill have to beat him mentally Planned it out, and then the round started, I immediately moved back a bit crossed my arms and leaned on the ropes.......... carrying out my strategy He threw heavy hooks n' jabs at me, my face, chest, and abs were sore unbearable pain, as he bashed my dome my head was whippin back n' forth 7 more rounds this happened for, at least, finally, he was getting tired carried on my plan and stood upright, my torso was stone, my legs were iron This was it, my chance to fight back.. With force I drew back my fist rage from all the oppression, racism and discrimination, I threw with that hit It blew him to bits, he stumbled back and fell, later he was taken to hospital It was only because of my determination I managed to do the impossible Later on, in interviews with the press, a lot of questions were asked "how did you do it?" .."I told you I would beat him before and you laughed.. I beat george foreman because I knew I could.. theres no more to tell its simple.. the only limitations you have are the ones you set on yourself" word |
hahahah rofl lmao omg omg good one omb you rele got me lmao rofl hahaha.....:)
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It was a real one dumbass!!! instead of being about bruce lee, or food.
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OMB...i know YOU dumbass thats why i was like all laughen jeesh hoes an tricks omb all tha same...:)
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A small child>...Magnificent...
na'mean? :thumbup: stop freeposting in my open mic -_- |
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Nicely done
Nicely done. I like stories written into ryhme form. I can not relate to this but it is nicely written. A bit of confusion but that can be fixed by splitting some of the verses up.....Nice piece tho :thumbup:
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nice wordplay it was a good piece...title misleading though lol but overall nice open mic .....gud vocab and nice flow stay up
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damn it...lol... i thought you were talking about yaself until i got to the end...lmao...
i liked this shyt... Muhammad Ali is THE GREATEST!!!... my idol, so i definitely enjoyed the ending.... werd! |
definately a hot drop.10/10.
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word thanks for the feedback.
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nice shit man real good verse. lol return da favor in one of my battles and my open mic.
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uppin............
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yo dat shit was pretty tight man
i gotta go wit "loveliss" u got 10/10 on dat one.return da fav.on my verse called "these is my feelins" and ill return da fav bac |
lol...unexpected omb....it was koo though...
why the hell you change your name to razzle dazzle...? man you pick weird names...lmao....good drop though... |
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