G_moneytildeath vs Lyric_RevelatioN
 

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Check in by: 11-06-04 at 03:00 AM

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g_moneytildeath has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-06-04 02:31 AM.

Lyric_RevelatioN has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-06-04 02:33 AM.

my games hot like "LLoyd banks" im "on fire"
im so raw kid u should just retire

i eat kids like u 4 breakfeast, lunch, and dinner
theres no point in battling we already no whos the winner

rite now ill do the a-town stomp on your face
spit 1 bar everyone go crazy in the place

i come at u with rhymes that are weird and tricky
after i beat u ill go 2 jamica n smoke weed with ricky

if u think u can beat me u must be on crackk
ill have u like tarver did jones ...made him lean back

my flow so sick man its just to scary
hit u with the low blow youll be singing like mariah carey

these bars are going 2 put you 2 rest
quit now cuz this is the hardest test

i will cum on your girlz face ....u kiss her
and ill ask u how it taste

im sorry if i offend you in any way
but i didnt think anyone on this site was gay

so im ending this freestyle but i have 1 more thing 2 say
.......fuck your and have a bad day

comin at me this kids gotta be brave
but beatin me in a battles like chris reeves risin up nd walkin from his grave

it aint gonna happen my lyrics are tragic constant
battlin me is like makin a porno wit magic johnson

unless you wanna catch his shit nd be sick wit AIDS
like an old ps2 game this bitch is bout ta be played

ill tap your jaw dog leave u outside in the fuckin bushes
and itll have you more illiterate than george w. bush is

its funny this broke niggas name is g_moneytildeath
his flows a 'joke' his name should be 'b_funnytildeath'

im startin ta fall asleep your styles kinda boring yo
do what they do on the commercials and twist this fuckin 'oreo'

yeah he sent me one of his pictures and i gotta be honest
treat your style nd your face like the tracks i lay and 'spit on it'

so if your thinkin your gonna beat me your prolli jus jokin
theres either somethin wrong wit your head or the crack your smokin

so finally in the end i murdered this opposing mind
and summarized the whole battle wit my closing line

'oreo' = half white half black



uppin for some votes

This was feedback posted for g_moneytildeath
 

Wow an odd showing of two newbs spittin very fuckin nice shit, tough choice lyric got punchlinesl eft nright..

But g money comes to the gut with shots..i dk who will win this one, a tie perhaps? u both have good future here. :laugh2:

uppin for some votes here..........................

anybody gonna fuckin vote here or what.............................

still uppin.............................................

uppin again...........................................

anybody gonna fucking vote...............uppin.......................... ..

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Voted For: Lyric_RevelatioN

LR:
Okay You Had More Potential In Your Verse Well At Least NewBie,Lol But ANy Way Your Structure Was Fucked And Vocabulary Needs To Be Upped Personals Wasnt Really There But Flow Was Good Nuff To WIn

G_Money:
Whack As Fuck Dont Up Your Self In A Battle No Punches Metas Multis No Nothing You're Just Plain Whack...Go And See One Mand Band Tutorials......

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