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MADDRAPPER 11-06-04 11:23 AM

The hate has widen in scope cats riding on coke like
 
The hate has widen in scope cats riding on coke like
Drug addicts, thug static everywhere not even a boat float right
On waters of destruction, borders of corruptions surrounds towns
Want greater powers and straighter towers they all lopsided
Foundation crumbling got a nation stumbling with the slop provided
By a political party a critical body of people for decision making
But religion taking the heart of America in part and character

LyRi-CaLi 11-06-04 12:49 PM

Nicely done. Gave me a good visual of what going on with drugs in society today. Like the vocabulary and some of the word play. I took this more as a poetic piece than a rhyme.
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Want greater powers and straighter towers they all lopsided/Foundation crumbling got a nation stumbling with the slop provided
Like that line...

MADDRAPPER 11-06-04 01:51 PM

LyRi-CaLi thanks for the props for real yo

Mc_BaD_bOy 11-06-04 02:14 PM

thats was ok not the best of open-mic but it was ok

hang-man 11-06-04 03:13 PM

shit man ya flow was smoth and hot to follow
good drop 7.5

MADDRAPPER 11-06-04 10:53 PM

all right thanks for the props on this one for real yall


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