quick freestlye...
 

aight...quick freestyle over the soldier beat....this is the first ever audio i ever done...first time i even touched a mic...only had it bout 3 days....and only just started usin cool edit....feel free to critise...and tell me how i can improve the quality n shit.....remember..its just a real quick freestyle....for the first ever time....pz

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uppin..................

quality isnt tha greatest...........flow is pretty good......you need to pronounciate ya words better.....delivery is aight

thnx for the feedback an advice man...im stil tryna figure out how to work cool edit and get quality better an stuff...but yer thnx....pz...uppin

yea, that was pretty good......... get ur quality up i think too...... and yo, for that collab..... since i got more experience with this audio shit.... u should send me ur verse (send me both the song and just ur voice so i can edit incase its messed). or w/e.... u think of a beat or anythin??

it sounds like your reading off paper.....


ne way.. quality was ass... but if you were freestylin ... then it was strait...

Quality is real bad, accent is real apparent, does kinda sound like you're readin off of paper, but if it's a free, then it's good, but it sounds like the vocals were overlapped, which would hurt the validity of it bein a freestyle, stay up, experience and willingness to learn is what gets you far.

-Tactics

ye thnx for the feedback...still....i did tht the first day i had ma mic and cool edit...and first audio ever.....id not even know wot to do bout ma quality n shit...doin a full track right now tho...so ama try up ma quality n shit....and ill post it soon.....thnx for the feedback again...pz