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frein-ma$ter vs FiRe
Battle Rules: 6 - Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 11-08-04 at 05:04 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. DQ'ed for going over line limit |
frein-ma$ter has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-07-04 05:06 PM.
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yo, yo, murk this newbie... ..Leave u cryin like a scorned-child..ur pathetic..lying to get respect..ur more of a FAKE FUCK than J.LO PORN-FILES. Skipped Fire's verse..I'm thru-readin-jokes..like TAMPERED BALLOT BOXES..it's apparent he's LOSIN-THE-VOTE. Words of advice..I'm not one-to-test-kid...cuz like POWERFUL TOILETS I'll very quickly CRUSH-YOUR-BEST-SHIT. This bitch ain't prepared-to-fight...my lethal punches knock Fire ON HIS KNEES'like hes sayin his PRAYERS-tonite. Get hostile-with-geeks..tear his eyeballs out and have him HOLDIN HIS FACE like COUNTIN DOWN in HIDE-N-SEEK. ~murked~ |
FiRe has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-08-04 10:20 AM.
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ma$ter yeah the master of herbs n d/r also disaster
ur just a gay ass thinkin he the the headmaster dickridin thats all u good 4 u jump off 1 dick n come 4 more ur gay ass muther fucking u so gay u dont like it hardcore u think ur a ganster but u a puff in disguise all this guy dose is crys im the master here all rise |
Voted For: frein-ma$ter
first off frein had 8 lines.......so i dunno if he d/q`d but n e way. frein wins because his punches had more metas...a more creative verse. frein you lacked jus about everything else,struc,flow..a lot of ya rhymin was off, punches were weak..try makin em personal,but u had a more creative and harder hittin verse. fire. sorry but hella wack.gud struc...no punches metas no nothin..jus a bunch of statements that made no sense, only thing u managed to achieve woz it rhymed. both return an honest one. http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=156905 |
yup^1 thanks for votin.....1-0 me uppin this!!!!!!!!
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