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Effect 11-07-04 06:47 PM

new song (HEAD RUSH)
 
Check my lastest song out in my sig you might like this one cause im improving all the time but please try and be positive on this shit.

New Meth0d 11-07-04 06:50 PM

you eleavtin but your quality still isnt that great.........flow needs some work just ride the beat dont force ya words it kinda sounds like ya reading.....get confident and jsut bust out with some good delivery .....and work on mic presence

hit me up as i ahve replied to 2 of your tracks.......you can find me my therad

LyRi-CaLi 11-08-04 03:35 PM

The quality is poor.
The lyrics are decent.
The flow was way off(But can work on that)
Like said above sounds like your reading it which makes you studder your rhymes.
Just work on connecting the sentences better.....
Good jOb

Tha Q 11-11-04 12:33 PM

Good job?

LMAO...on what?...making me laugh


YES...EXCELLENT



SInner...ur return diss (not like it's necessary) is coming...it's guaranteed RV classic...u will die in 1 day


BIOTCH

Effect 11-11-04 12:35 PM

tha q so will you bitch and i hope it's today plus ya stickin ass queer family haha.


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