FiRe_BoY vs Sub-0
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

you spit first

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-09-04 at 09:24 PM

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FiRe_BoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-08-04 03:31 PM.

ur the master of dickriding so jusmp of mine*
nigga stop being a herb n fuck off dont wine

dont fuck with me but u did so prepare to die
man get out ur dads ars n stop sticking it high

hope u like hole cuz u'll have 1 in ur head
sting u up like i was spiderman n shoot u dead

Sub-0 has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-09-04 03:21 PM.

I cool dis dudes ryhmes like dentyne ice and put his skills to da test./
da only time he on hot is when they talking bout his breath./

How you expect to go up against the master when you rhyming partial./
If did dude claims to be on fire you could call me da fire marshall./

I put out flames faster doing the winter time./
You stepped to me and spit whack linez, shit like dat will get you flat lined./

Voted For: Sub-0

weak battle,both came played and simple,sub-o came slightly harder tho becuz he had creativity and didnt only diss with simpistic concepts.
ps.return the favor in my sig and vote thx -1-

Voted For: Sub-0

ur the master of dickriding so jusmp of mine*
nigga stop being a herb n fuck off dont wine
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ BAD OPENER NOT AN GOOD PUNCH



dont fuck with me but u did so prepare to die
man get out ur dads ars n stop sticking it high

^^^^^^^^^^^ WEAK AND NOT AN GOOD PUNCH



hope u like hole cuz u'll have 1 in ur head
sting u up like i was spiderman n shoot u dead
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ BOOOOO NOT AN GOOD CLOSA NOT AN GOOD PUNCH


FIRE-U HAD GOOD FLOW BUT DA PUNCHES WERE WEAK MAYNE







I cool dis dudes ryhmes like dentyne ice and put his skills to da test./
da only time he on hot is when they talking bout his breath./
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ OK PUNCH GOOD OPENER


How you expect to go up against the master when you rhyming partial./
If did dude claims to be on fire you could call me da fire marshall./
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE WORDPLAY GOOD PUNCH



I put out flames faster doing the winter time./
You stepped to me and spit whack linez, shit like dat will get you flat lined./
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NOT AN GOOD FLOW BUT OK PUNCH WORD


SUB-U HAD OK PUNHCES GOOD WORDPLAYS DA PUNCHES WERE GOOD


OVERALL=SUB-O GOT DIS HANDS DOWN CAUSE HIS PUNCHES WERE HARDER AND DA WORDPLAY HE HAD WAS GOOD

WHY I VOTED FOR SUB-O-CAUSE FIRE-BOY U DIDNT HAD AN GOOD PUNCHES SOME OF DEM WERE PLAYED AND DIDNT MAKE SENSE SO THATS WHY I VOTED FOR SUB-O

Voted For: Sub-0

hey yo this battle was weak all around. Sub-0 needs to elevate some more. He gets my vote for more punches and a better flow. Fire_boy your shit looks like it was rushed. you need to elevate your punches and vocabulary. No Hate. Just an honest vote. Return tha favor with an honest vote.
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Voted For: Sub-0

Ok sub wins this, he had real punches, wack but still had real punches no personels tho, a lil meta and better flow and structure, other guy, word of advise........ elevate

Voted For: Sub-0

breakdown

sub-
I cool dis dudes ryhmes like dentyne ice and put his skills to da test./
da only time he on hot is when they talking bout his breath./
^^aight good opener flowed nice and had creativity i liked it

How you expect to go up against the master when you rhyming partial./
If did dude claims to be on fire you could call me da fire marshall./
^^ aight good punch hit real hard flowed nice and good vocab

I put out flames faster doing the winter time./
You stepped to me and spit whack linez, shit like dat will get you flat lined./
^^your structure lacked in this line good closer flowed good

aight all in all you had really good punched only one line was stretched and you had every line as a personal which made ur verse all the better
7/10

fire-
ur the master of dickriding so jusmp of mine*
nigga stop being a herb n fuck off dont wine
^^eh okay punch wasnt to good i wasnt feeling this opener flowed well tho

dont fuck with me but u did so prepare to die
man get out ur dads ars n stop sticking it high
^^gay jokes are pretty much played and that was a weak one flowed good

hope u like hole cuz u'll have 1 in ur head
sting u up like i was spiderman n shoot u dead
^^eh weak closer flowed okay coulda been better

overall you came really weak you only won in the structure catagory you had a simple verse basic vocab so work on that a lot but you had okay flow just fix up everything else
4/10