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B. Magik 11-08-04 07:00 PM

~back Bitch!!!~ [hot Shit]
 
jea...Im back...still ill as fuck...fuck jpoll...this my first open mic since being banned for shit that aint happen...fuck it...check this out...

..who wanna match-this? its Magik, on fire-like-matches..
..get ya back-split, and bent back-in, like chiropractics..
..fags-get axed-quick, by the mac-or-the-hatchet..
..I'm hazordous when graspin-this, crackin-shit like glass-in-fists..
..I'm nice-with the mic-when I-spit like-it was-lightning..
..You biters-get-iced-quick, my style-is blinding like-sirens..
..make haters-believe, and leave-craters when blazin'-emcees..
..straight-from-the-streets, there aint-an-emcee, greater-than-me..
..I'm ill-with-these-nouns, killin-these-clowns, who wanna-get-stuck?..
..I'll have the only 'grill-in-your-mouth' be the one-from-my-truck..
..Straight butter-you-up, naw fuck that, I'll eat-you-raw..
..fight-with-a-pencil, and when I-get-thru, you won't live to see-tomorrow..
..defeat-you-all, I give-whiplash to kids who spit-trash..
..kiss-ass and get ya ass-kicked, don't get ya ass-kicked then kiss-ass..
..I bench-fags, get ya shit-smacked, dont dare disrespect-this..
..have you bleeding-and-red, and leaving-your-head, spinnin'-like-records..


holla at me yall...leave some feed...1

B. Magik 11-08-04 10:09 PM

yo...too many peeps viewing this bitch but aint noone leaving no fucking feed...I will return the fuckin favor!!! leave me some!!! uppin this bitch!!!

B. Magik 11-08-04 10:11 PM

yo...what the fuck is up with these ip addresses??? Why the hell are they different??

JJFLOWSUM_5 11-09-04 04:07 PM

ey yo MAGIK wasshood?dat was tight man,good vocab
but ya flow wasnt as good as it couldve been
i gove u 7/10 keep up...holla...

B. Magik 11-09-04 05:09 PM

no doubt...what was wrong with the flow? It flows to the beat I wrote it to...hmm...well thanx for the feed man...uppin for more in this bitch...1

JJFLOWSUM_5 11-09-04 06:58 PM

well maybe ur flow is rite i might not of
been readin it rite but it dont matta cause its still tight

B. Magik 11-11-04 09:13 PM

damn this shit got hella slept on...will someone leave me some feed?? I personally think its pretty good...tryin to see what yall think...I will return the favor...but dont leave no bullshit feed...tell me what you liked/disliked...what i need to improve...all that good shit...lol...uppin this bitch...1

Loveliss Grandz 11-12-04 10:34 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by BLACK~MAGIK
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..I'm hazordous when graspin-this, crackin-shit like glass-in-fists..
..I'm nice-with the mic-when I-spit like-it was-lightning..

..I bench-fags, get ya shit-smacked, dont dare disrespect-this..
..have you bleeding-and-red, and leaving-your-head, spinnin'-like-records..

there was nothing wrong with this drop,so i can't tell u i didn't like sumn'.i did like the whole drop,it was fire.those two pieces up there was the onez i felt the most tho'.the flow and wordplay was sik.10/10.flawless.keep em comin'

~THA GHOST~ 11-12-04 10:41 PM

god damn...this was the illest drop ive seen on dis site in a while...keep dat shit comin...damn...10/10...

B. Magik 11-13-04 12:44 PM

lmao...thank you! thank you!...Its a shame that only 3 people have left feed on this...But, I really appreciate it...thanx yall...uppin this bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 1

B. Magik 11-13-04 12:47 PM

wow...53 views and only 10 replies? That is crazy...Damn feedback is hard to get...fuck...uppin this mutha fucka...jesus christ this is depressing...

FlowIntelligent. 11-19-04 09:54 PM

this was pretty dope... i was really feeling the multies im a big fan of multies myself so this to me is really hot... good vocab and wordplay structure was good 9/10 keep em comin

B. Magik 11-19-04 09:59 PM

wow...no doubt man...thanx for the feed...this is really appreciated...uppin...1

Oz™ 11-19-04 11:42 PM

hmmmmmm....pretty dope....liked ur wordplay n ur vocab n shit....ur nice may'n......return tha favor in whats wrong with our communities and taste my medicine part 2

B. Magik 11-20-04 12:28 AM

cool...will do homie...thanx for tha feed...uppin this bitch!!


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