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1st threw 3rd
The first miss is that you listen, the second's in suspicion...
The third is rhyme addiction, whenever I be spittin... I'm flipping better flows. I think they are in decibels... This is the desert and you're stupid wearing leather clothes... Don't get it twisted bitch, I'm good at this so called evil shit... Walk up in a church and make a preacher scream out Holy Shit!... This niggas triple-six, but it is gona be the complete reverse of it... Slaughter tracks sorta like the murders commited by Berkowitz... Devoted vocalist, overflowing with such explosive poet riffs... Don't play or beef with me, cuz these lyrics come to me easily... Sporadically transmitting freestyles, always telekinetically... I burn heat with 3rd Degree emergencies, Urge Mcs with Urgency... Wage whimsical wars of writen words, prefer to eat the weak verbally... Speech is refered to as unique as types of verbal surgery... |
uupin lets get some feedback on this please
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nice drop....feelin ur flow and ur vocab n wordplay
keep droppin may'n 8.5/10 give some feedback at my drop "Taste My Medicine....Part 1" stay up |
thanks for the feedback man.....uppin come on lets get some more please
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Pretty good for an open mic...Topic was nice....you had a nice flow and some nice vocab too.....8/10......A pretty good one...keep up tha good work peace.....
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nice drop.
You have a good vocabulary. You also no how to place your word's. Rhyme's are dope. I am unsure why this is getting slept on.I think it's dope. |
yeah man a lot of my stuff gets slept on...who knows why....w/e i get used to it i guess.....thanks for the feed..... you got some tight shit urself so dont be givin me all the glory now....peace~1
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nice stuff mayne...8/10...good vocab and wordplay...keep it up.......1
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vocab,structure,and flow was damn good.8/10.keep em comin'
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uppin thanks for all this feed fam glad my shit aint being slept on too much anymore
peace~1 |
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