Till I Collapse Remix
 

Till i collapse ill do the maths/
to count how many people had played in my back/
no mather in fact,like trash,youll go down and dash/
with a knife ill slash,with a hammer ill smash/
your not my kind you dont have enough class/
ill make cash on your back/
by saying your name on every single track/
be happy that i hold my anger into my mother fucking self/
than trowing it at your mother fucking self/
your very lucky that im felling smily but it wont last/
ill turn bad to make you sad to make you turn mad
you without a smile is making me glad/
i event have pitty for a poor thing like you/
i never had some and i will never do
if im writting this shit its because that im feeling it/
and if you dont like it dont buy my music/
Damn get on your knees for the signer of the mouth
cuz i know it wont last longuer you chump/

just give me feedback..its something i made fast so dont hate

decent but u coulda done better withthat topic
you should re remix it
but good shit check mines

thanks man..i did audio with it

it was decent you need some vocabulary and youll be good, check mine yo

weak vocabulary and weak topic.........Wasnt feel it

kinda weak.....

.......u need better vocab..........

it was ight up ure wordplay a bit and rhyming homie yall be ight

thanks everyone il work one it

Vocab And Wordplay Wuznt Good.it Wuz A Real Simple Drop.wasn't Terrible,but You Could Do Much Better.4/10keep Em Comin'.

someone want to help me to rebuilt this song cuz im going to the studio to remix it and i would like dope lyrics...