took 30 mins..written piece
I toss mcces into tha burning inferno wit a fire like temper
Im fully focused bout starting n empire as I keep ma eyes in da center Producing scripts at lightning speeds Im just using ma trix for ma writing needs Reciting knees as im frighting these challengers Im sighting mcees as they come one a day like Christmas calendars Sparking magic as ya guaranteed ta feel ma presence Lol in fact u can call me santa coz on tha mic I deliver ma presents N it’s a sure thing dat ya gunna feel it Im as sharp as da claws on a cat so u call me felix Im stayin tight as ma heart continues pumpin Rappin day n night as ma sickness exploding like bullets to a pumpkin N im improving everyday by inches n fractions As im jumpin over more hurdles than colin Jackson Come ta me n ya bound ta get played n left sorted I play around for days n its like my chest forces These words ta manouver n come of ma tounge I’ll burst a looser so dun I blame ya if ya run to ya mum I aint complaining as I survive n sway tides Imcompetence breaks guys as its always da words that come out n da face hides Ma raps glide smooth wit pride Im like n eagle da way I move n slide Ma bones grindin as the rest of ma life unwinding I sit alone rhyming knowing dat catching a beat about right timing Ma life a struggle dealing with daily requests I wish I could just sit back why you pay me cheques Alcohol consuming…girls, chics… ladies n sex That’d be the life without problems or a daily hex But it’s the thought of failing in da first place dat made me vexed But ima keep flowing n keep it down ta earth Ive ground da dirt n now im here ta conncect ma sound ta nerves N leave n mcee fried n in da worst state So dun go dissing me wen u aint even heard me in da first place Coz that shit annoyin n just leaves me pissed Sick rhymes im employing just ta leave weeds dissed Sit back… relax, put ya feet up n read this Maybe youll collapse wen ya discover this intelleligent species Bombard you wit rap treaties ta leave ya buried Im on charge weekly n’ll hang u upside down n bleed ya belly That’s just a quick message ta judge mental-dudes I dun hold a grudge but in a battle im quick ta grind a pencil through. I know I’ve got talent but im yet to have been pushed Coz wen I rap I come straight through like a fucking clean swoosh N I wanna learn different styles so I can rite all stuff I mite fall rough but that’d be down ta academics coz ma fucking high-school-suxed When a teacher handed me a pen It’d melt n burn quick Coz I would always write rhymes n never learnt shit N ma grades were so bad u can call me mister d I never stayed…got ma grades n I was quick-ta-leave Moving on to college..that’s a whole new era Fuk ma knowledge.. now I got room for a whole new error Mind as light as a feather...I dun bite never ever I dun give a shit wen im out I’ll write wotever tha weather. Ite cool im out..this was just text lunch This a little of ma skill.. just wait till I bust next month YUNG-FLOWS!!!!!!!!!! |
Wasnt Bad,wasnt Great But Wasnt Bad.too Long Tho'.after A While Ur Saying Nothing In So Many Words.6/10.keep Droppin'.
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ayo can u up this plz................
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:thefinger good stuff man. Could of put a little more effort into it but I think i'm pretty close to your level. You've been writing longer than me most likely :thumbup: Decent drop 7.5/10 Gimme sum feedback on my next :spit:
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yo uppin............................................. .................................................. ..
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