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streetryda 11-09-04 09:50 PM

Monotony
 
I am a product of types of artistic inspiration
my words are spoken with a lyrical condemnation
Of today’s intoxication with sedation of the threat of wax evasion
since they killed crowd participation It’s been only precipitation
chasing rain clouds on the never ending prevent the lending
Of the negative ora that is sending
over these instrumentals no incidentals gone about it
That elements will keep your mind shrouded with the doubted
Wondering how’d it get so irreversibly rerouted and utterly crowded
Because being poetically pathetic claiming they aided and abetted now hip-hop is diabetic
Who got the anesthetic I’ve been on to get it monotone is synthetic keeping the sugar imbedded
Niggas and I went into the rhythm and the notion that hooker’s get wet and spread it
Offers the way I said it to the tune if how I bring it to ya juncture
410 is coming threw ya punctured
The status flow I be the baddest grown
that’s half as slow as far as mathematics go
But lyrics are the major. It’s within my nature
to debate in deviation unless ya on ya own
That’s why I keep it monotone

Hook:
Exist to be free
You revise the hip-hop mentality
You must be stopping THE monotony
That’s how it ought to be
With all these wanabee’s to emcee’s
Continue dropping THE monotony

This year I keep it monotone for man and lords are demonophonic
Cuz when I get on it my mind and law is monolithic
Niggas claim that they gifted but they only monotypic
Cuz we twisted heads, complains where the markets’ cannibalistic
But yo I come equipped with the shit that is automatic
How can you be artistic when you are monochromatic?
Or begin be mono motto’s that name you mono Grammatik
When I become emphatic my work becomes monosyllabic
Yo we go mono a mono and the tragic, stay the static of the men that had it
With all the gats and ganja addicts my life be mellow dramatic
Emcee’s figured they hard and they think they monometallic
They’re minds is so simplistic
They just a bunch of misfits
Claiming they’re monogamistic
Yo but I know, they suckkas and they bound to catch mono

Hook:
Exist to be free
You revise the hip-hop mentality
You must be stopping THE monotony
That’s how it ought to be
With all these wanabee’s to emcee’s
Continue dropping THE monotony

streetryda 11-10-04 03:05 PM

comeon peeps lets see some feedback on this....
peace~1

streetryda 11-10-04 09:08 PM

uppin ppl damn read this its really good.........stop sleepin and leave feedback already!!!!!!!!!!!

Ysdat 11-11-04 12:55 AM

Why,why,why the fuck is this slept on??
This is some dope shit streetryda.
Rhyme's,word usage and flow is all there.Plus the hook is on point.
nice drop.
keep them coming.

streetryda 11-11-04 04:36 PM

thanks for the feed fam...much appreciated....ill get back to on that collab soon

Loveliss Grandz 11-12-04 10:47 AM

it's all here folks.u showed brilliant skill here.10/10.keep em comin'

streetryda 11-12-04 02:48 PM

uppin graci for all this feed finally.....hoping to keep seeing more comin.....i think this is the best thing ive ever written so yeah...peace~1

streetryda 11-15-04 09:07 PM

come on ppl stop sleepin...anyone think this worthy for OM of Nov??!!?!??!?!
if so then vote for me and put the link in ur vote so other ppl can judge

streetryda 05-13-05 08:28 PM

uppin more ol' shit

Elegiac 05-13-05 09:38 PM

Really nice vocab, but the lines seemed stretched to me.

Because being poetically pathetic claiming they aided and abetted now hip-hop is diabetic
Who got the anesthetic I’ve been on to get it monotone is synthetic keeping the sugar imbedded
^An example

But my fav lines were:

Of today’s intoxication with sedation of the threat of wax evasion
since they killed crowd participation It’s been only precipitation

Overall nice piece keep it up..

Kawn Flixx 05-13-05 10:07 PM

Closed no link pm me a link if you wish to have this re-opened


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