Taste My Medicine....part I
 

So pay attention as i display wordplay on these cowards,
crack ya bones outward, give you a shock like usin toasters in showers,
who feels my power?duplicate of a legend eatin pussies speech up so watch your words get devoured,
inside ya minds, like i commited a mental crime,make ya hearts sublime,
pace myself, so "watch" Men~Iz throw ya body into "clocks" just to show you a waste a "time",
killin herbs, destroyin ya wordz, your verse has beenn corrupted,
cuz my shits blazin like Mt.Vesuvius just erupted,

second drop....im jus tryna elevate my skill....feedback peeplez

not bad...
flow was decent..
word-play was ok..

So pay attention as i display wordplay on these cowards,
crack ya bones outward, give you a shock like usin toasters in showers
that was preety good...

u battle???

if so holla at me throu PM i might have a offer for u....

VIOLENT TYPE...

thanks for the feedback


uppin peepz.................

this was kew...it was jus a lil choppy...but, you definately got tha jist of textin...good use of vocab, wordplay, multis, and metas....i see "legend" potentenial...i was feeling that tha opening...keep it up and elevate yo...

thanks homie.....more feedback peoples

Thought this was good......Didnt seem to be choppy to me....

"So pay attention as i display wordplay on these cowards,
crack ya bones outward, give you a shock like usin toasters in showers,"
Good verses.....

You had nice metas and great vocab, some good wordplay....short but sweet keep it up

thanx may'n......more feedback peoples..............

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Good open mic....Topic was good too....Your vocab....and wordplay .....were very good....good open mic for a newb...or you mite just be a talented newb anyways 8/10 on this ....keep up tha good work peace......

thanks for the feedback fury.....need more peepz......

tight drop man....it was a lil stretched but i dont think that matters when its packed with multi's and shit....cuz its how i write......flowed great...you sure ur really a newb cuz if so where u been sleepin you def got talent man....bery good multi's and vocab was good wordplay was good too...keep it up man..peace~1

thanks ryda.....more feedback peoplez..............................

it was good 8.5/10....part1?.....is u gonna make a part 2or sumthin.....if so then im looking froward to reading it..........1

good drop.short an' sweet.opener was fire and the rest was gas added to the flame.keep elevatin'......
V.T. uppnn......