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MADDRAPPER 11-10-04 01:31 PM

Drop It Hot For Real
 
Drop It Hot For Real

A bad smile is devastation like mild irritation cause skin
To itch and smash folks, trash hopes and pauses trend
Flows best and molest microphones throw cess at domes
Strong words can wrong herds of sheep stress and roam
Curve real deep into souls; see nerds that disturb peace
Of mind allow the beast to climb into imaginations and feast
On the good thoughts, hood caught up into confusion
Throttles rap then use a bottle cap to seal it up just an illusion
Some sluts gone loco and sweet like a cup of cocoa at Starbucks
On computer bazaar and type corrupt ground soft my car stuck
Mean nerds are like European bird their wings and bling flaps
Part German talk crap like Mark Furman but they cling to rap
Oil my quotes then spoil their hopes, chokes with coils of rope
Like Clint Eastwood in Hang Em High best tin foil your jokes
Filthy gunning and swiftly running like streams with steep banks
Got deep blanks in my mind causing screams walk on street planks
Love glamour this thug hammer with mandrel my grammar plan fell
Now study books ignore cruddy crooks their reputation don’t stand well
In and out rumbling affairs true my girl has a becoming hairdo
Attractive and vexed active with sex others stumbling can’t compare to
Her, lips like a red rose in bedclothes body steamed and aroused
In the greenhouse where plants are grown can’t keep my pants on
Got a chance to bone dance all night long and the romance strong//
My hydraulics pound a nation’s solid foundation pops the rocks
That supports its standing in court demanding goods while blocks in shock

MADDRAPPER 11-10-04 06:02 PM

Upping For Responses

intensify effect 11-10-04 08:25 PM

yo honestly what the fuck u be thinking about when u writ these shit???

ya flow be off da hook...
thats ya main focus huh??
flow good, multis good N it was RAW...

love'in it...

9.93764927 outta 10......

keep'em coming N take me to the lab with ya next time so i could elevate my flow as-well.....

Blunt Rapper 12-09-04 01:14 PM

to fuckin long so make it shorter

Phat Don 12-09-04 01:17 PM

its good but a bit to long

MADDRAPPER 12-10-04 01:07 PM

Hey Yall Thanks For The Props For Real Yo

Zeke 12-10-04 02:22 PM

Dope Peice Kid, You Be Elivating Quickly Huh, Nice Multis Yo Let Me Come To The Lab As Well, And Blunt And PhatDom, Stop Fucking Around Yall The Same Ppl But Ay Good Shit.....10/10

karnevil_kid 12-10-04 02:45 PM

yo word that shit was tite..multis were on point..i dunno if you were going for a verse or just some raw shit but i think you should shorten it up a lil..one verse = 16 bars...but that shit was def off tha hook..stay up 1

MADDRAPPER 12-10-04 09:20 PM

Thanks For The Props For Real Yo


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