trying to elevate my flow * high freestyle *
 

i've been peeping madrapper stuff in open mic and hes sick with hes flow i think and people always my flow is decent but im trying to get my flow down-packed so when i actully think N use a punch i can flow it smoth N crazy so here go a high-freestyle for ya to judge N BASE IT ONLY ON THE FLOW..

i aint go for punches or noting JUST FLOW....
PEEP..

i got a intense sense that a few men wanna opose
with 4's N hoes who think they wont get smash with bo's N mo
then those average killah can send N hold in da cold
life toll is to un-fold a new path 2 grasp N dont step.. befor i blast
ya trash u'll get smoke like hash for dat cash while thinking about my past
that created this mental state-kid, with fire that look like im bake'in
but im pace'ing N make'in a new style for ya to take-in
base'in like addicts N get ya face in da attic while ya body get padded
my attiude da baddest, pink slip lose N ya'll be the gladdest
but this savage cant have-it...
cuz ya heart like pin-da-taill-on-da-donkey, trust i'll take a stab-at-it
take N shot at me?, hope u carry'in a automatic
cuz that jewlery is like... i auto-have-it,
N bullets is free..... so i feel u auto-have-it
splat ya adom, re-place it with ya nut... cuz u spitting like a dick
splitting this heck who persist to say hes lines are deadly.. while slitting hes wrist
holloween pass.. How u expect me 2 "treat this trick"
aint no peacefull-shit, cuz i'll keep fireing on ya block till ya street-is-lit
115-7 who streek is this, who beef is this
u'll brake ya ankle trying to follow my foot-step... who feet is this
FUCK.. why dont u greet this clip, while bullets meet-ya-lips :shoot:
got ya body feeling like C-low the way u done TRIP... dont ask for me to get a grip
cuz that'll be ya last slip N dip.. into another HOLE like a clit.. BITCH.....


honest feed back BASE IT ON FLOW ONLY....
cuz i honestly aint focus on no punches what-so-ever ....

upp'in dont sleep ya......

the flow was ill.....keep it up man......real nice
peace~1

no dout thanks for u'r feed back...
upp'in..

i was high like a mother fucker so dont mind me.....

I.E. u did ya thang man.the flow was sik.

V.T. upppnnn...................

thanks for the feed back.....

upp'in.............

upp'in this for more feed back.............................

upp'in this shit.....................................

upp'in again...................................

up up and away she blows

your stucher unlike most people on this site was supburb man for real you have the nicest sturcher there is on here man i like it that is a plus so keep it up the flow is nasty to man

oo-shit that fow was fucking ILL word danm thats hit was fire keep it up 9.5/10

yo man that shit was dope sik as fuck flow rhymes were tight 2...

upp'in.......

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