- ! : Flawless : ! - vs FiRe
 

Battle Rules:

6 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-11-04 at 02:04 PM

Must drop verse in 65 minutes after check in.

- ! : Flawless : ! - has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-11-04 01:00 PM.

FiRe has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-11-04 01:05 PM.

im hot like pepper sauce flawless bout to make u Retire
U Eatin hotsauce when u shitin datz da only time ya ass on fire
my skillz iz 1 of da most desirez,i rain punches like seattle
they call me un-predictable but dogg itz predictable i won diss battle
im quick to kill ya like a snake wit out a rattle b
tha only way ya namez fire becuz u got to battle me

$ ~1 ~ $

flawless ull be on the floor thinking less
ull have no life cuz u just came n strated to mess

flaw yep ull be there crying soon enuf
fuck ya face up like u a fuckin puff

man u cud be homo even if u wasnt sexual gay-bo
man u got no skill cuz beat a guy stoned so yo-hoe

Voted For: - ! : Flawless : ! -

not dat much of a good battle but
Flawless took this one

openin verse-flawless
structure-hmm...tied
punchlines-not dat many but flawless took it
multis-flawless
metas-hmmm...
personals-not enuff or any? problably a tied
overall verse-flawless

no hate on this battle aight peace........

Voted For: - ! : Flawless : ! -

im hot like pepper sauce flawless bout to make u Retire
U Eatin hotsauce when u shitin datz da only time ya ass on fire
^^^^^^^^^^^^ "EH' DONT STRETCH CHA LINES THAT MUCH MAYNE BUT GOOD PUNCH


my skillz iz 1 of da most desirez,i rain punches like seattle
they call me un-predictable but dogg itz predictable i won diss battle
^^^^^^^^^^^^ ALL FLOW NO PUNCH ALL FLOW



im quick to kill ya like a snake wit out a rattle b
tha only way ya namez fire becuz u got to battle me
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE CLOSA GOOD PUNCH


FLAW- U HAD AN GOOD "OK" VERSE U HAD PUNCHES AND PERSONALS AND META'Z






flawless ull be on the floor thinking less
ull have no life cuz u just came n strated to mess
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ERM KINDA WEAK MAYNE NO PUNCH

flaw yep ull be there crying soon enuf
fuck ya face up like u a fuckin puff
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ DOESNT MAKE SENSE PLUS ITS AN WACK PUNCH ELEVATE


man u cud be homo even if u wasnt sexual gay-bo
man u got no skill cuz beat a guy stoned so yo-hoe
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NOT AN GOOD CLOSA MAYNE


DEVIL- U NEED TO ELEVATE BAD MAYNE, PUNCHES WERENT GOOD AT ALL MAYNE


FLOW (FLAW)
PUNCHES (FLAW)
META'Z (FLAW)

FLAW GOT DIS HANDS DOWN IN ALL CATEGORIES

DEVIL- ELEVATE ON PUNCHES AND FLOW BUT MOSTLY PUNCHES

Voted For: - ! : Flawless : ! -

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Flawless, ya verse was aight...you're gonna need to work on the punches tho, make 'em more creative next time...the 'ass on fire' line is played yo...anyways, u had decent consistency, which was a plus........Devil, ya shit was way too basic...u definitely need ta' up yourself creativity-wise wit punches n shit...no hate, just some honest feedback...both yall stay up

V/ Flawless, for more creativity...

i need an honest vote here:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=157669

This was feedback posted for - ! : Flawless : ! -
 

checkin polls mayne.......for crew related reasons...

Voted For: - ! : Flawless : ! -

flawless ull be on the floor thinking less
ull have no life cuz u just came n strated to mess
…no
flaw yep ull be there crying soon enuf
fuck ya face up like u a fuckin puff
…meh no again
man u cud be homo even if u wasnt sexual gay-bo
man u got no skill cuz beat a guy stoned so yo-hoe
…no

im hot like pepper sauce flawless bout to make u Retire
U Eatin hotsauce when u shitin datz da only time ya ass on fire
…decent
my skillz iz 1 of da most desirez,i rain punches like seattle
they call me un-predictable but dogg itz predictable i won diss battle
…okay
im quick to kill ya like a snake wit out a rattle b
tha only way ya namez fire becuz u got to battle me
…decent closer

Flawless took this one…
Had harder punches…a decent
Structure & a nice flow too…

Devil…work on yo shit mayn..
Those punches were weak…nun of them
Made any sense tho…but elevate more
Tho

Pz.

This was feedback posted for - ! : Flawless : ! -
 

handz down blaza won dis battle. he had better flow-rhymes-and just blew away devil. devil u need to work on ur flow alot more i was a bit lost trying to read it even though it waz 6 linez it was stil confuzin. the outcome= blaze da winna

This was feedback posted for - ! : Flawless : ! -
 

checking polls......

can uguyz juss vote to close the battle man????????

Voted For: - ! : Flawless : ! -

this was easy N weak as the same time....

blaze got this win hands down but hes battlers was WEAK AS FUCK so this was a no-brainer....

flow: blaze
punches: blaze
creativeness: blaze

vote: blaze...

yo blaze are u from NJ?? or BX??
i think i might know who u are if u are the same blaze im thinking of............