RED BEAM vs frein-ma$ter
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 65

Check in by: 11-11-04 at 05:28 PM

Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in.

frein-ma$ter has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-11-04 04:58 PM.

RED BEAM has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-11-04 04:59 PM.

yo,

yo,

..Red gets broke-certain..detonation of bombs sets him on FIRE like 'EMPLOYEES' who oppose-WORKIN,
Left this hoe-hurtin...I'll viciously SLICE HIS FEET OFF and dispose em..now I really got him SOLE-SEARCHIN.
Ur done kid..I've seen-enough..injectin a flesh eating virus to 'EAT HIS HEART OUT' like he's 'NEEDIN-LOVE',
Leave the scene beaten-up..like IRRESPONSIBLE GIRLS ON THEIR PERIOD..Frein will leave u LEAKIN-BLOOD.
Makin this fucker-stutter..his torn limbs get left in the 'SEWAGE SYSTEM'..now hes really 'FROM-THE-GUTTER,
This punk-gets-smothered..my brutal hits has him like 'DROWSY SPRINTERS' the way he RUNS-for-COVER.
Quick to chin check-this-fag..tryna shoot me but ur 'GUNS DON'T WORK' its obvious ur TECHS-IS-BAD,(Text)
Neglect-the-wack..this kids pathetic..but like REJECTIN GIFTS OF ALMANACS he DOESN'T ACCEPT-THE-FACT.
My assault will bruise-this-clown..so face it..STEALIN AMMO is the only way u would've 'TOOK-THIS-ROUND',
Abuse-his-sound..puncture his chest leavin him fluidless..like U.K ROBBERIES I got him 'LOSIN-POUNDS'//

~murked~.

match me.....about 10 bars...

i flow like water faucets, u cant be serious
1 and 6, why u keep tryna dawg, it leaves me curious
frein-ma$ter? ya damn bastards, u just a actor
just cause u read DR.SEUSS, dont make u a rapper
stop while u can, its danger, dont proceed
look "CRIP", try to "WALK" tall, RED'll make u "Bleed"


g2g...forget the rest

lol ^ wtf.....wasted my time .....

upppinnnnnnn!!

This was feedback posted for frein-ma$ter
 

damn yo frein this a nice verse dawg..........

.......i liked how u changed up ya style.........

.......good punches and everything.........



.......ayo i thought Red Beam was better than this.......

yeah thanks for feed^ uppppppin!!! some votes!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: frein-ma$ter

Red Beam- your verse was decent but you thought this was gonna be an easy ass battle for you so you only decided to write 6 lines...your punches were some what good ...your structure was good ...plus it was easy to read too...

Frein- Master- your verse was wayyyy better then Red Beam, plus you had more lines then him which also really helped you out too...your punches were good but some were weak but you had more lines with better punches then him overall you got my vote for better punches and verse....peace....

v/Frein-Master....

yea, i had to go. i can MERKK the hell out of him sabatoge, i am better than that, but its coo. uppn

aiyo. frein, my bad for waistin ur time. we can go again sometime if u want, but look at this as a easy win for u...one-sided

oh yea, and i did notice that u posted a long ass verse kinda quick, but i aint gunna bitch about it, do ya thang homie

Voted For: frein-ma$ter

frein won it....he definietely had more and better punches..all the lines were about the same size too...red beam shouldve had a little longer verse but oh well..red needed to work on his punches and vocab...frein had bettter puches vocab wordplay and multi's/....this goes to frein-ma$ter!

Voted For: frein-ma$ter

he won with ease.....freinmaster