hot bars!!!!
 

this is my hot bar im given to ya'll. thell me how ya like it. it freestyle.


Niggas is gettin blasted when they get in my way. I stash da k. I go big!! what u think i'm B2Gay/

See im the type dat put 5 in yo door.I call my guns rims. How I cause all attention to yo front and leave yo back board/

Its not a mistake. in the fifth in my backpack holdi a tank. First day of show Tell I brought the shank./

Niggas got problems but da don't wanna see me. Cause I put wholes in da stomach the size of CD's./
Yall could c d's bullets fly like a bird. So next time you see me you betta watch ya words!!/

Theres luv in da air. Lets see how much the condom hold. Im tryin 2 get in your girl bed like a stuffed animal./

Niggas got a lot to say put they dont know wat im holdin...and they get dick like trogans...and da face get swollen...my ryhmes keep rollin...I don't catch battle raps I throw um'/

I'm a ghetto child u can see me with these. Trees and burned CD's. Couldnt get alicia so I kopped some keys.
Yall small as Peas. I serve the feenes. on the block since I was 16... tryna get green/

I stay on the blocc puttin in work. leaven blood stains on your shirt. Every wound gone hurt...yall wack rhyes is comin' up shorter than mini skirtz/

Some niggas is real and some niggas is fake...some niggas is Knives and some niggas is steak/

Some niggas survive and some niggas is bait/

ssup ,,, sum good rymes there ..... structure needs a bit of a tidiyin up
most gud rymes....... wid deep meanin

dese lines were ma fav :

I don't catch battle raps I throw um'/

Some niggas is real and some niggas is fake...some niggas is Knives and some niggas is steak/

Some niggas survive and some niggas is bait/

overall structure needs bit of sortin an few of the lines ..........gud spit ova all

keep elevatin

not bad like he said realy but not bad at all good read

Not Good, Not Good

Man How old are U :laugh:

wasn't really feelin' most of em'.last two lines was alright.keep elevating.