String9487 vs .:Jack Rackam:.
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-12-04 at 08:30 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

.:Jack Rackam:. has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-12-04 08:13 PM.

String9487 has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-12-04 08:16 PM.

STRING IS IN THE BUILDING!!!

eh yo, u try n "nail me"..then ima snatch off ya cuticle
put Jack in the "box" like its an office cubicle
u wind up badly jumped, dis chicken i'd gladly pluck
cuz to me, dis dude spit worse than DAFFY DUCK
homie u aint hot,... to hell with u
and ya punches wouldnt even stick wit Elmers glue
ya idea's aint grounded dog , they just flyin n shit
Call u Mr Planters, cuz u NUTS tryin to spit
u cant see cuz ya terminally blind, this match is verbally mine
cuz Jack, ya flow look like u and Jill's nursery rhymes....HAAAA

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Voted For: .:Jack Rackam:.

punches-Jack took this with his more witty puunches and his hit alot harder

flow-jack takes this... his just flowed alot better

jack-your pucnes was good... they hit hard and they ws witty...your personals hit him hard aswell...your flow was good and your structure i liked aswell

string...wasnt really feeling your verse that much man... your flow was okay but i was nt feeling your punches or your personal... elevate a lil bit and keep trying man

Voted For: .:Jack Rackam:.

.:Jack Rackam:. - Good spit dawg, you had a good flow.. and your punches were hitten hard.

Best Line - u get’in decked! Like ya shufflin-next, this nerd could never match my text,
cuz in this battle hes to curved n exed like a granny in a wet t-shirt contest,

Worst Line - Deaths close tonight as Times tick’n quick like watches with speedy lice,
You Wanna spit nice n tight… try clampin down n spitten from a vice

String - iight spit, you had an ok flow.. and some good punches.

Best Line - u wind up badly jumped, dis chicken i'd gladly pluck
cuz to me, dis dude spit worse than DAFFY DUCK

Worst Line - eh yo, u try n "nail me"..then ima snatch off ya cuticle
put Jack in the "box" like its an office cubicle

OVERALL - an OK battle, with the winner being .:Jack Rackam:. he had the better flow.. and his wordplay was better same wit his punches. String your punches were good to just try and add some personals and up your flow.

Vote - .:Jack Rackam:.

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Voted For: .:Jack Rackam:.

Wow, hella one sided battle, Anybody using Daffy Duck in there rhyme, especialy like that, really dno't have a chance to win.

Rackem, you had some dope punches in there and some good wordplay.

String, punches were basic, not hard hitting, and structure was ass.

Jack Rackem got this No Doubt.

Voted For: .:Jack Rackam:.

aight, Jack Rackam came WAY harder than String this couldn't be more one-sided.. your wordplay was nice creativity was good, flow was also good fell off once towards the end.. the closer was alright.. but the multis and vocab was a good combo.. the first bar was enough to take over in this battle.. if sumone says otherwise, then sumthin's wrong.. String u had sum attempts with metas but u lacked the other catergories.. this should be a TKO.. my vote/ Jack Rackam-- and i don't know him so it's not a hate vote.. :thumbup:

Voted For: .:Jack Rackam:.

Easy battle man.. Rackam took the win, better flow, better multies, better disses, vocab..

String, short lines dont make things flow. Also:
eh yo, u try n "nail me"..then ima snatch off ya cuticle
put Jack in the "box" like its an office cubicle

^That isnt really a diss... Thats why you need to elevate and look at his weaknesses, and make diss punches about them instead of just normal rap punchlines..

Get what I mean?