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uknowwutitiz 11-12-04 08:05 PM

uknowwutitiz vs ..Lyrical..
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-15-04 at 08:05 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 11-12-04 08:05 PM

uknowwutitiz has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-12-04 08:05 PM.

uknowwutitiz 11-12-04 08:15 PM

yea i'm back
and i'm back wit a strap
u wanna crack
then i came back for u to get clapped
if ya girl talk shit then she can get bitch slapped too
right after i bitch slap u
if u havent already noticed i been rapped too
so its rap for u
u sound like u whack to da max
talk shit and you'll get whacked wit da mac
u betta chill
before yo ass get spilled
nigga dont get killed
u could wear suits dats camoflauge
I'll still find u fill u with bullets and leave yo ass paralyzed


yea pussy and dat wuz jus a warm-up

System 11-12-04 08:35 PM

..Lyrical.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-12-04 08:35 PM.

J. Dubya 11-12-04 08:42 PM

This novice flat-lined before my verse even started...
He’s makin’ Vanilla Ice look like a free-style artist...
My balance is on target..I never do it sloppily...
This game isn't your style..it’s nothing like monopoly...
This kid’ll be a ghost by the time he gets 40 posts...
Meqa will protest his own death like he was French Toast...
So when you're merked after this it'll seem like deja vu...
I only used 8 lines and had twice the rhymes as you...

..think about tha french toast line

GKillaz05 11-12-04 09:10 PM

Voted For: ..Lyrical..

..Lyrical.. - Good verse, your flow was hott and your punches were hitten hard.

Best Line - This kid’ll be a ghost by the time he gets 40 posts...
Meqa will protest his own death like he was French Toast...
So when you're merked after this it'll seem like deja vu...
I only used 8 lines and had twice the rhymes as you...

Worst Line - NONE

uknowwutitiz - WHACK

Best Line - NONE

Worst Line - ALL

OVERALL - Lyric took this battle wit ease - the other kat was whack as fuck, you need to work on throwin some punches and maybe a vocab and some creativity.. you might just be hopeless though.

Vote - ..Lyrical..

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J. Dubya 11-13-04 02:35 PM

^i'll check that lata...

uppin..

Implicit 11-14-04 01:09 AM

Voted For: ..Lyrical..

this was a weak battle from both of u

1st dudes structure was messed up he had no punches no personals flow sucked horrible verse

lyrical was better but still not that great at least his structure was ok and he attempted a few punches


vote lyrical

uknowwutitiz 11-14-04 02:28 PM

fuck outta here
 
get off his dick his shits wouldnt even dat raw and u whack ya own damn self pussy talkin bout how u be blastin guns and shit
u aint gangsta nigga sit ya marshmallow ass down all soft and shit :gfy:

RICH-Nytch 11-24-04 05:43 PM

Voted For: ..Lyrical..

yo dis was hot you got my vote on lock finish himm

KahnShienz 11-24-04 06:16 PM

Voted For: ..Lyrical..

Honestly I Read Your First Bar And It Impressed me More Than The Other Dudes Whole Verse..

uknowwhatitis needs to get his game up immensly.. lyrical took it in every catagory..

KahnShienz 11-24-04 06:17 PM

............ Can you Guys Vote Honestly in The Links Below My Sig Its Greatly Appreciated........

Recluse 11-24-04 07:25 PM

Voted For: ..Lyrical..

this as one sided...v/lyical....for not making throw my computer out the window...v/lyical


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